Matthew Anish Poet Blank verse

Towards a New Freedom

Inside the core 
of the world 
      there are signposts
leading to a new freedom 
   this inner freedome 
   is something 
           which should be cherished 
by those who wield the lightning bolts 
   of the heavens
          inner freedom 
    is a step to 
the new dawn 
               of 
              peace 
we will find it if we decide 
to dance foward 
   into the most 
  radiant aqure blue sky

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Elizabeth Wesley May 4, 2012 at 1:20 PM I would seem we all are chained to something; we wait for that new dawn to come. Love the words in this as they lead to something positive! :)

Andrea Dietrich May 2, 2012 at 12:48 AM Very optimistic and I sure hope you are right. well, about ESL websites, I just google stuff but I hear a lot of good things about Tom's Cafe. Yeah, my chinese student told me just the other day, long ago it was popular to eat monkeys. Good grief. And I think today some men eat the LIVE brains for virility. Wish the monkey would bite them in the pecker.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2012 at 1:42 PM So beautiful said and written Matthew. - oxox Anne-Lise

Keith Bickerstaffe April 30, 2012 at 1:30 PM Nicely structured, Matthew. Inner freedom is the pathway to the world peace we all crave, to be sure. Well done, my friend! Best wishes, Keith