Toward Zion

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Almighty bestows compassion driving empowered faith glorifying holy immutable Jesus… …kindles loving might nurturing optimistic prayer quickening revival spirit~~~ ~~~toward uplifting victorious worship --- --- xenial yonder Zion*. *Psalm 50:2 Out of Zion, the perfection of beauty, God hath shined. November 10, 2021 10th place, "YOUR PREFERENCE" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 2/8/2023.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/8/2023 11:23:00 AM

Beautiful write Beata. Congratulations on your win! :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/12/2021 11:53:00 PM

We are perplexed, enlightened Extatic aware, always hoping Those of us lazy in faith as I have been' All await appearance of Jesus To come, I find Zion and the return a tricky one Though especially in the light of covid the People of Jerusalem have been double jabbed And then had their green card status? Dropped Unless the get more, is that not lies & Oppression? Is there mass conversion to Christ There? If so it won't make news' Oh well.' Just Trust and wait, this gets my Thoughts going'

Joe Maverick
Date: 11/12/2021 11:55:00 PM

Ran out of space Should read even those of us lazy in faith as I have indeed Been at times'

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/10/2021 3:16:00 PM

Fine penning Beata, God bless you,Gordon

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/10/2021 7:49:00 AM

Wonderful. Love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina