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Tow the Lines

pantoum Squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine. while lighthouse keeper, Lenny tends his work - light shows tricky traps on rocky shoreline. Len loves to watch brigades of birds that lurk. While lighthouse keeper, Lenny tends his work, voracious, screeching seagulls seem to pray. Len loves to watch brigades of birds that lurk, a group of gulls glide ‘round the ocean spray. Voracious, screeching seagulls seem to pray, “Len, tow the lines,“ - crab traps need attention. A group of gulls glide ‘round the ocean spray - time for breakfast, obvious intention. “Len, tow the lines,” - crab traps need attention. Light shows tricky traps on rocky shoreline; time for breakfast, obvious intention. Squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine. December 18, 2019 Sponsor Joseph May Contest Name Pantoum - Old or New

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Date: 8/31/2022 4:18:00 AM
I enjoyed this write! Congratulations, Len!
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Date: 8/28/2022 9:52:00 AM
Congrats on your win Reason, Very nicely done
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Date: 12/20/2019 2:01:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Reason
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Date: 12/20/2019 8:54:00 PM
thanks, Gregory, I am enjoying the pantoum again after several years of skipping over them.

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