Tourists, To Be

Tourists

Talked to a girl in Egypt today
last thing in the world she would
do with time off, is look at pyramids.
Talked to a man in Paris, Eiffel tower
not worth his hour.  Talked to an old
New Yorker, has not been up to the
top of The Empire State, not his idea
of a date -- seeming that, many travel
far to see where locals hold no immediate 
priority -- a muted sense of eternity?
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To Be

Why on earth mars?!
Far-out local bars
Sun good enough for me
When it comes to stars;
And if the subject is eternity
Then every day is Free!
And Shakespeare was wrong -- 
One could never not be....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Maverick Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 3:03 AM
I obviously agree with a lot staying in The uk 40 plus years addmittedly id like To return now..And the gobalists struck I think i'll get you to fix them Joe Dimino Like that mosquito..' we now don't know.)
DiMino Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 3:57 PM
:)) Sometimes the only way Joe. Hand in there, and keep doing your best. Blessings my friend.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 1:43 PM
a delightful read, Joe, with bits of truth about travel. I especially liked the last two lines.
DiMino Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 2:05 PM
Thank you, Sara; just relating some of my own observations about the world in general. My own perspective, no more. Have a great weekend my friend.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 1:28 AM
Loved your fun write. You get to know people if you avoid the glamour.
DiMino Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 5:45 AM
Thank you, Victor; a pleasure to know you. Blessings.
Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 8:48 PM
Interesting stuff, Joe. I especially related to the first stanza. Never been to Millenium Park in Chicago - a 'must-see' from tourists the world-over. ~ gw
DiMino Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 5:54 AM
I lived in New York, 40 years -- never bothered to go to the top of the Empire State Building. Though most of us fail to understand the significance, it is because we have an innate sense of eternity.... Truer, spiritual relevance. It is not simply because, it is there...not going anywhere soon, and if I ever want to see it I can whenever. Today I will do this....more important. Spirit cries out for what the apparent physical world cannot offer us. True reality, the real that is not the ephemeral, always changing commercialism we deal with everyday. Evil perpetuates the baubles that distract us, knowing well our egoistic, foolish appetites.
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 10:39 AM
Again I just love your topic and writing style. When I was in Spain, semester abroad, a small group of us would veer off the tourist path and wander the unique narrow streets and find things other tourists don't see. This is a fave.
DiMino Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 12:44 PM
Best way to get a real feel for a nation is to be with its people where they live and take care of their families. We discover we have much in common and also some purely delightful differences when not being so formal. Thank you for the support, Andrea, it means a lot to me.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 8:25 AM
A fun write and there is much truth in it. Have you watched the movie, “Midnight in Paris,” likewise no one likes there period of time. Where do we find our satisfaction. We let the Lord lead us. God bless!
DiMino Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 8:50 AM
No, I have not seen that movie -- will check it out. For sure, God is my oasis of love and hope.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 8:22 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. I enjoyed reading. There is some truth in, one does not see what is in their own backyard. Only a Tourist will enjoy. Have a creative/fun day writing away...............
DiMino Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 8:52 AM
My wife just told me that this morning, as I have neglected the grass and weeds. Thank you, Paula. Blessings my friend.
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