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Tourist In My Own City

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rise and shine early to make the most of every minute out and ready to pinpoint a direction picked a fine sunny day to take time off and play tourist in my own city go exploring with fresh eyes no predetermined destination just a general course no agenda not even a watch go with the flow see what tugs my heart strings stop and go as I please turn right or left without a care shade or sunny side check out people as they go by engage or not today is my day to be free Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~TO BE YOUNG AGAIN~ 2023 AP: 3rd place 2021 Submitted on July 30, 2018 for contest BEST FREE VERSE IN JULY 2018 sponsored by LAURA LOO and on July 19, 2018 for contest JULY 2018 PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 6/2/2021 9:56:00 PM
I like being a tourist in your own city, particularly the part not wearing a watch!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/2/2021 10:25:00 PM
Yes, it is a treat for sure ~
Date: 7/14/2018 4:33:00 PM
You have a magic way in telling a story like this that deals in the unmasking of your own preconceptions of life in the city. Your words say everything by evoking thoughts within the reader's consciousness. Well done my friend, Emile.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/15/2018 4:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Emile, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/10/2018 9:51:00 PM
I enjoy these city writes, LG!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/10/2018 10:02:00 PM
Thank you, LM, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/10/2018 2:51:00 PM
Great idea. Makes you see the city with different eyes.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/10/2018 6:25:00 PM
Absolutely, Agnes. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/10/2018 1:40:00 PM
A lovely idea Line, sometimes its a real battery charger to have a ME day especially in your own surroundings. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/10/2018 6:24:00 PM
Indeed. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.
Date: 7/10/2018 12:46:00 PM
Indeed it is....wonderful poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/10/2018 12:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML. Much appreciated.

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