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Touchstones

My morning walk was rainy; My feet were soaking wet. Though I had an umbrella, Every puddle was a threat. My mask fogged up my glasses And the sky was pre-dawn dark. There weren’t many people out On paths inside the park. Yet even dressed in rain gear With my hat pulled down real low, My sunrise buddies spotted me And called out a hello. I recognized them both as well By looks and also gait, Our morning shout-outs the reminders Of a former state When strangers were compadres In the urban life I knew, Reduced now to my touchstones, Our good mornings right on cue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/17/2020 5:43:00 PM
I can feel the thrill you all three experienced, recognizing each other.
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Date: 10/16/2020 12:58:00 AM
I'm inspired by your regimen of walking, my friend. I think it's a very important part of sanity as well as physical health. Always nice to see the 'regulars' out and about.
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Date: 10/13/2020 11:44:00 AM
Well done! The only way to get used to that pesky mask is to wear it! Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/12/2020 10:17:00 PM
Great write Ilene. Really good description. I could see you walking through the park trying desperately to hang onto some part of your normal life despite all the new restrictions. I think we are all getting tired of this. It's time for the common man to stand up and say enough is too much already. They are using this fear to take away our freedoms. Well done. God Bless and Happy Thanksgiving. JB
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Date: 10/12/2020 7:05:00 PM
P.S. Something's wrong with my email. I'm not receiving replies to my work? Not sure what the problem is. Be patient. / M
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Date: 10/12/2020 7:01:00 PM
Your last stanza brought back memories of several people I used to greet on my morning walks in the park years ago. Most were elderly. I went to the park only last week after an absence of 8 months. A few things have changed – fewer old trees, better designed flower beds, and brilliant fall flowers everywhere. Enjoyed reading this poem. / Maurice
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Date: 10/12/2020 3:13:00 PM
I second Jan's comment, and admire you for being able to handle the rain with your mask on. You are something else, ilene! Here's to that daily morning walk! :) gw
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Date: 10/12/2020 2:07:00 PM
Only you could make a rainy morning walk into such a fun poem Ilene, :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/12/2020 2:07:00 PM
Only you could make a rainy morning walk into such a fun poem Ilene, :-) hugs jan xx
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