Touching the Sunset

Along the boat dock I strut toward you,
with my hips entranced in a ready sway.
My eyes are enthralled with each painted hue,
as your figure glistens like a sun ray.

Your outstretched body calls for conquering,
joining nightfall, surrendering to set.
Your essence graces the playful blurring
of the water body's edge, calm and wet.

Brush stroke skin, glowing bright with enticement
silently beseeches, pleads for my touch.
Jiving fingers reach, celestially sent.
Your heavenly body throbs in my clutch.

As this lakeside sunset is descending,
each twinkle hastens our hopeful blending.


11-6-19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 6:35 AM
Congrats on your top win, Juliet. Well done.
Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Thank you, Line
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November 13, 2019 at 4:51 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place, Juliet :) - Romantic and beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Thanks, Sunshine Smile for brightening up the page.
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:16 PM
back to say congratulations my friend... hugs
Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, Sandra. Hugs to you.
Chiri Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Congrats on a great win!;)
Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, Brenda.
Gondolf Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Very romantic and sensual, Juliet, congrats on your win. John
Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Thank you, John.
May Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 6:40 PM
Congratulation on your Win! Juliet! wonderfully written
Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Thank you, Bobby.
Adams Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 11:23 AM
such a beautiful romantic write flowing from your pen, this is splendid my friend! :) hugs
Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:10 AM
Thanks, Sandra. Poetic hugs.
Michael Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 11:08 AM
Romancing La Juliet... I like it...
Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:10 AM
Thanks, Arturo.
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