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Touching the Sunset

Along the boat dock I strut toward you, with my hips entranced in a ready sway. My eyes are enthralled with each painted hue, as your figure glistens like a sun ray. Your outstretched body calls for conquering, joining nightfall, surrendering to set. Your essence graces the playful blurring of the water body's edge, calm and wet. Brush stroke skin, glowing bright with enticement silently beseeches, pleads for my touch. Jiving fingers reach, celestially sent. Your heavenly body throbs in my clutch. As this lakeside sunset is descending, each twinkle hastens our hopeful blending. 11-6-19

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Date: 11/13/2019 6:35:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Juliet. Well done.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, Line
Date: 11/13/2019 4:51:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place, Juliet :) - Romantic and beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine Smile for brightening up the page.
Date: 11/12/2019 7:16:00 PM
back to say congratulations my friend... hugs
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2019 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra. Hugs to you.
Date: 11/12/2019 7:02:00 PM
Congrats on a great win!;)
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2019 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda.
Date: 11/12/2019 6:59:00 PM
Very romantic and sensual, Juliet, congrats on your win. John
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2019 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, John.
Date: 11/12/2019 6:40:00 PM
Congratulation on your Win! Juliet! wonderfully written
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2019 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, Bobby.
Date: 11/6/2019 11:23:00 AM
such a beautiful romantic write flowing from your pen, this is splendid my friend! :) hugs
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2019 9:10:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra. Poetic hugs.
Date: 11/6/2019 11:08:00 AM
Romancing La Juliet... I like it...
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2019 9:10:00 AM
Thanks, Arturo.

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