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Touching the Stars

The blue mood of silence, is there on the screen Not a whisper, no dialogue, just a hum that is found A celluloid reel, spinning backwards in time while flickering shadows, has hushed all the stars that watch through a curtain, while marking the years The soft ocean breezes are catching your hair. It frolics, embracing the blue dress you wear You are running barefoot along the incoming tide The beach is as smooth as the silk of your skin You are flying a kite in the swift summer sky You raise up your arm, and are waving at me A smile on your mouth, and a star in your eyes I can almost hear whispers, that come from afar shattering silence, without any sound The joy of it falls through the long winter years.... In voiceless, vague memory, to rest on my ears I follow along...as I'm watching you play Your lips ever moving....what is it you say? I find myself reaching... still, wanting to catch to set a small trap...and reach into the past I can't hear the chords,....nor the score to your song Or music I long for.....that is kept by the stars But, here in the heart of this moment, I grasp Like the kite reaching higher....while piercing the sky Weaving a magic...where joy never dies I watch how you hold to that kite in the sky... and cross over the threshold....no questions to ask... You've thrown a last kiss.....that I reach out to catch And for a moment together, .... we are touching the stars....
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/25/2015 11:42:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations in John Lawless "Just Within Reach" contest. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 4/21/2015 7:18:00 PM
Carrie, a very touching poem speaking to me of tender, treasured memories. I love your gift, Carrie; I think you have been blessed by God with something special. Congratulations, my friend.
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Date: 4/21/2015 5:49:00 PM
So very beautiful and full of wondrous imagery, Carrie. Congratulations on your great win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/21/2015 2:43:00 PM
I so love your use of alliteration! Congrad's on your verse winning. Light & Love
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:14:00 AM
Carrie the rhythm of these sweetly soothing words plays on the mind as the surf plays on the beach. Thanks for entering this in the contest.
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:30:00 AM
so soft Carrie and stunning in every way.. :)!
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Date: 3/13/2015 2:02:00 PM
[Sigh] Should have been higher! Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love
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Date: 4/5/2011 9:23:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Carrie. Very well deserved win. You captured so much with this poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:16:00 PM
Lovely write a bittersweet take on laughter. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/5/2011 3:49:00 AM
I knew this would be among the top winners. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 4/4/2011 2:41:00 PM
For this wonderful kite poem,Congratulations on your great win Carrie,,Gautami
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carrie in Desiree's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:55:00 PM
Captivating poem Carrie. Congratulatios on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:48:00 PM
Beautiful and well deserving of the honors!! Gwendolen
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:40:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your superb win in Reconsidering Laughter contest with these magnificent marvelous lines of poetry .. enjoy your 2nd place my friend with luv..
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:04:00 PM
Beautiful, awesome poem capturing a wonderous time now a memory which will live for all your years, Carrie! Well deserved 2nd Place Win in Deseree's Contest! Goes to my Favs. List! Love, Audrey
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Date: 4/4/2011 11:20:00 AM
cingrast on your high win, carrie.. a joy to read :) huggs
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:05:00 AM
Quite a deep and image-packed poem on how you find and "catch" laughter, Carrie. Big congrats on taking second place in Desiree's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/30/2011 9:26:00 PM
Such a beautiful way to write on this contest. Loved the end.
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Date: 3/30/2011 8:40:00 PM
A beauty Carrie...I have no words..BG
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