Touching the Stars

The blue mood of silence, is there on the screen Not a whisper, no dialogue, just a hum that is found A celluloid reel, spinning backwards in time while flickering shadows, has hushed all the stars that watch through a curtain, while marking the years The soft ocean breezes are catching your hair. It frolics, embracing the blue dress you wear You are running barefoot along the incoming tide The beach is as smooth as the silk of your skin You are flying a kite in the swift summer sky You raise up your arm, and are waving at me A smile on your mouth, and a star in your eyes I can almost hear whispers, that come from afar shattering silence, without any sound The joy of it falls through the long winter years.... In voiceless, vague memory, to rest on my ears I follow along...as I'm watching you play Your lips ever moving....what is it you say? I find myself reaching... still, wanting to catch to set a small trap...and reach into the past I can't hear the chords,....nor the score to your song Or music I long for.....that is kept by the stars But, here in the heart of this moment, I grasp Like the kite reaching higher....while piercing the sky Weaving a magic...where joy never dies I watch how you hold to that kite in the sky... and cross over the threshold....no questions to ask... You've thrown a last kiss.....that I reach out to catch And for a moment together, .... we are touching the stars....
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April 25, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Carrie, Congratulations in John Lawless "Just Within Reach" contest. Always ~ LINDA ~
Gibson Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 7:18 PM
Carrie, a very touching poem speaking to me of tender, treasured memories. I love your gift, Carrie; I think you have been blessed by God with something special. Congratulations, my friend.
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 5:49 PM
So very beautiful and full of wondrous imagery, Carrie. Congratulations on your great win! Hugs, Sandra
Guzzi Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 2:43 PM
I so love your use of alliteration! Congrad's on your verse winning. Light & Love
Lawless Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:14 AM
Carrie the rhythm of these sweetly soothing words plays on the mind as the surf plays on the beach. Thanks for entering this in the contest.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 7:30 AM
so soft Carrie and stunning in every way.. :)!
Guzzi Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 2:02 PM
[Sigh] Should have been higher! Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 9:23 PM
Simply beautiful, Carrie. Very well deserved win. You captured so much with this poem. Congratulations.
Guzzi Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Lovely write a bittersweet take on laughter. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mannan Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 3:49 AM
I knew this would be among the top winners. many congrats for this win.
Phookan Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 2:41 PM
For this wonderful kite poem,Congratulations on your great win Carrie,,Gautami
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carrie in Desiree's contest. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Captivating poem Carrie. Congratulatios on your big win. Love, Joyce
Song Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Beautiful and well deserving of the honors!! Gwendolen
Sweetheart Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Congrats Carrie on your superb win in Reconsidering Laughter contest with these magnificent marvelous lines of poetry .. enjoy your 2nd place my friend with luv..
Haick Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 12:04 PM
Beautiful, awesome poem capturing a wonderous time now a memory which will live for all your years, Carrie! Well deserved 2nd Place Win in Deseree's Contest! Goes to my Favs. List! Love, Audrey
Onclaud Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 11:20 AM
cingrast on your high win, carrie.. a joy to read :) huggs
Mehta Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Carrie
Devonshire Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 9:05 AM
Quite a deep and image-packed poem on how you find and "catch" laughter, Carrie. Big congrats on taking second place in Desiree's contest! Love, Carolyn
Mannan Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 9:26 PM
Such a beautiful way to write on this contest. Loved the end.
Gorelick Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 8:40 PM
A beauty Carrie...I have no words..BG
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