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Can i ask a question love smiling in all honesty are you real or has it all been me dreaming because you're lighting up all the space residing inside my thoughts You're beautiful smile is driving me crazy wishing that I could kiss you upon the lips my dream delight Or could it be possible that I am a fallen angel as you touch me with your grace healing a miracle at the hands of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/29/2014 3:33:00 AM
Some times we love what we do not have, and this poem is so strong and manly, and I love it.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2014 3:41:00 AM
thank you john truly humbling beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 9/25/2014 2:58:00 PM
You could never be a fallen angel, my dear. This is a lovely write. I read it before, but am coming back go comment....You are really enamored by her, aren't you!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/25/2014 3:26:00 PM
i fell a long time ago but to see purity in someones beauty yeah hate to say it but you're right smiling wonderful comment bless you
Date: 9/24/2014 3:14:00 PM
This is so romantic, Liam. Love it...especially the final three lines. // paul
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/24/2014 4:01:00 PM
smiling paul thank you touching deeply beautiful comment bless you
Date: 9/24/2014 5:16:00 AM
It's tender and deep,, like when you love someone to eternity. Nice poem Liam, loved it!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/24/2014 6:13:00 AM
thank you for the touching beautiful comment gautami bless you
Date: 9/23/2014 3:32:00 PM
Oki..This deserves a favourite and to my favourites it goes..So so romantic!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 3:46:00 PM
thank you kindly charmaine heartfelt beautiful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 9/23/2014 8:18:00 AM
Yes, without touch nothing stirs, liam
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 8:54:00 AM
sorry dr.ram new at answering comments so to speak you know that final touch sealed it for me smiling thank you kindly dear friend
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 8:25:00 AM
the only words that love allows one to write as it colours everything around wonderful comment mary so glad you liked it bless you

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