Touching

Can i ask 
a question love smiling 
in all honesty
are you real 
or has it all been me dreaming 
because you're lighting up all the space 
residing inside my thoughts
 
You're beautiful smile 
is driving me crazy wishing 
that I could kiss you
upon the lips 
my dream delight 

Or could it be possible
that I am a fallen angel 
as you touch me with your grace
healing a miracle 
at the hands of love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Canon Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 3:33 AM
Some times we love what we do not have, and this poem is so strong and manly, and I love it.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 3:41 AM
thank you john truly humbling beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
Manassian Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 2:58 PM
You could never be a fallen angel, my dear. This is a lovely write. I read it before, but am coming back go comment....You are really enamored by her, aren't you!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 3:26 PM
i fell a long time ago but to see purity in someones beauty yeah hate to say it but you're right smiling wonderful comment bless you
Callus Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 3:14 PM
This is so romantic, Liam. Love it...especially the final three lines. // paul
Mcdaid Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 4:01 PM
smiling paul thank you touching deeply beautiful comment bless you
Phookan Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 5:16 AM
It's tender and deep,, like when you love someone to eternity. Nice poem Liam, loved it!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 6:13 AM
thank you for the touching beautiful comment gautami bless you
Chircop Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 3:32 PM
Oki..This deserves a favourite and to my favourites it goes..So so romantic!!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 3:46 PM
thank you kindly charmaine heartfelt beautiful comment dear friend bless you
Mehta Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Yes, without touch nothing stirs, liam
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 8:54 AM
sorry dr.ram new at answering comments so to speak you know that final touch sealed it for me smiling thank you kindly dear friend
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 8:25 AM
the only words that love allows one to write as it colours everything around wonderful comment mary so glad you liked it bless you
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