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Can i ask 
a question love smiling 
in all honesty
are you real 
or has it all been me dreaming 
because you're lighting up all the space 
residing inside my thoughts
 
You're beautiful smile 
is driving me crazy wishing 
that I could kiss you
upon the lips 
my dream delight 

Or could it be possible
that I am a fallen angel 
as you touch me with your grace
healing a miracle 
at the hands of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/29/2014 3:33:00 AM
Some times we love what we do not have, and this poem is so strong and manly, and I love it.
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2014 3:41:00 AM
thank you john truly humbling beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 9/25/2014 2:58:00 PM
You could never be a fallen angel, my dear. This is a lovely write. I read it before, but am coming back go comment....You are really enamored by her, aren't you!
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/25/2014 3:26:00 PM
i fell a long time ago but to see purity in someones beauty yeah hate to say it but you're right smiling wonderful comment bless you
Date: 9/24/2014 3:14:00 PM
This is so romantic, Liam. Love it...especially the final three lines. // paul
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/24/2014 4:01:00 PM
smiling paul thank you touching deeply beautiful comment bless you
Date: 9/24/2014 5:16:00 AM
It's tender and deep,, like when you love someone to eternity. Nice poem Liam, loved it!
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/24/2014 6:13:00 AM
thank you for the touching beautiful comment gautami bless you
Date: 9/23/2014 3:32:00 PM
Oki..This deserves a favourite and to my favourites it goes..So so romantic!!
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 3:46:00 PM
thank you kindly charmaine heartfelt beautiful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 9/23/2014 8:18:00 AM
Yes, without touch nothing stirs, liam
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 8:54:00 AM
sorry dr.ram new at answering comments so to speak you know that final touch sealed it for me smiling thank you kindly dear friend
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 8:25:00 AM
the only words that love allows one to write as it colours everything around wonderful comment mary so glad you liked it bless you