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Befriending an animal is achieved with gentle touch, once you can touch it freely, you know it trusts you. Animals & humans alike. - The Poet Receiving a parcel filled with silver and gold. Wouldn’t compensate for not having your hand to hold. When you use your strong hands to hold me tight. I slowly fall into raptures of delight. Your body pressed firmly against mine, On the rug beside the fire, we recline. I succumb to the beat of your heart, How did this enigmatic feeling start? The superlative feel of your tender touch. Emotions well up inside of me, it’s almost too much. Running your hand over my skin, Sets off a yearning, coming from within. Primal emotions ignite as your lips reach mine. A powerful kiss that feels so fine. Our bodies are moving so slowly, but my mind is racing. It has to be love, all doubts are erasing. I yield in anticipation of your caressing touch. My body quivers. Let this go on forever, I love you so much.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2023 3:40:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/15/2023 10:03:00 AM

Thanks Sara, I appreciate your congratulations.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/13/2023 7:00:00 PM

You cast a hypnotic spell with your slow buildup of entwinement in this narrative, highlighting each nuanced flicker of anticipation inking emotions of loving endearment. Warmest congratulations on your inevitable win with this one, SV

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/13/2023 7:48:00 PM

I know its not too bad, when you praise my work Seeker, and I appreciate it. A heartfelt thank you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/13/2023 11:49:00 AM

Dear friend SV, I am truly delighted to offer my sincere congratulations for your well-earned win in my contest. Your poetry is truly awe-inspiring, as you express your ideas with remarkable accuracy and grace. Your picture is really inspiring as well.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/13/2023 12:10:00 PM

With all the wonderful entries I read, I certainly wasn't expecting a win in your competition SP. I am pleased you saw merit in my poem. As for the picture, What better way to illustrate "Touching" than with a picture from the movie Dirty Dancing? I have read where Patrick Swayze was admired by males as well as females. He became a talented footballer in College to dispel any innuendos regarding him being well versed in the art of ballet. Thank you for your kind comment and generous placement in your competition. SV

Bill Baker

Date: 9/5/2023 10:31:00 AM

Sizzling poetry, SV. Very engaging as you build to a crescendo leading to the final line. Taking your time you build and engage the reader, line by line. If for a contest, you won't need luck. :-) Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/5/2023 12:55:00 PM

Wow Bill thank you so much, you just put my intentions for this poem right into place, Thank you so much for your encouraging words. I already have a win, with wonderful Comments like yours, Inks, Valsa's and Anne-Lise's . I am truly lucky to have such wonderful poetry friends.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/5/2023 9:47:00 AM

Such a sensual and romantic poem that flows in such a passionate manner. I can feel that “ touch” sensation through and through as i read this poem. You really have a way with storytelling in a poetic manner and i also love the line “ emotions well up inside me it almost too much” so intense and moving! Soul hitting take: loved it. Goodluck for the contest

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/5/2023 12:57:00 PM

Ink I am so very proud that you enjoyed this poem. I have added you to my followed list so I can start regularly reading your fine poetry now also. Thank you so much for this wonderful comment. SV

Valsa George

Date: 9/5/2023 2:22:00 AM

A poem of escalating emotions of love and romance ! I can read the chemistry of your love equations......Dopamine + Serotonin + Oxytocin = LOVE. I feel your love is like an aeroplane gaining momentum on the runway just before take off. Beautifully writtren in your usual perfect rhyming !

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/5/2023 3:43:00 AM

Again Valsa, your comment is better than my poem !!!! I love the way you comment. You throw your heart into every comment you make. Not just to my poems. To every poem you comment on. You are such a sweet lady and a very dear poetry friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2023 1:50:00 AM

- A beautiful depiction of what it feels like to fall in love, S.V. :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/5/2023 3:39:00 AM

So long ago Anne-Lise but it seems like yesterday. I guess its something you never forget. Thanx for your generous comment. BOL for your lovely poem about the wonders of hearing too. I remember it, I had better go make sure I commented. I really am getting forgetful.