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Touched by God

Once touched by God, what then remains, for then there’s nothing left to seek. Unlike ego, love never feigns, as head and heart dance, cheek to cheek. Vaporised presence is at peace, ambling along slowly through life in monk mode, embrace and release, free from strife, at all times bliss rife.

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Mat Ignacio

Date: 12/29/2023 7:42:00 PM

'Vaporised presence is at peace' - nicely phrased

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/30/2023 5:05:00 PM

Thank you, Mat

Deb M

Date: 12/29/2023 9:19:00 AM

How lovely your poem is US….simply and beautifully said! Lovely….Debx

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/29/2023 5:50:00 PM

Thank you, Deb dear :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/29/2023 9:09:00 AM

your rhyme scheme flowed, not forced or distracting to your overall message. I especially liked the first verse. I appreciate your views, your experiences, and your willingness to share them

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/29/2023 5:50:00 PM

Thank you, dear Sara :)

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2023 8:35:00 AM

I need to try this form.. Maybe tomorrow.. nicely done..

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/29/2023 8:46:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One