Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

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Touched By a Feather

clouds caress the sky
with a trail of white feathers...

                grass tickles our toes 



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7/13/15  For Skat's Contest: "Feathers"

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Kim Merryman July 17, 2015 at 9:50 PM I love this, Carrie! I've seen clouds that look feathery and this reminded me of them. Congrats on your win with this fantastic haiku! Going in my favs. Love, KIm

David Mohn July 17, 2015 at 8:15 PM what a carefree beauty Carrie...congrats!

Eve Roper July 16, 2015 at 4:24 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7

Kp Nunez July 16, 2015 at 3:33 PM Congratulations, Carrie! Love this traditional haiku! hugs

Shadow Hamilton July 16, 2015 at 11:15 AM lovely Carrie congrats on win hugs 7

Jan Terry July 16, 2015 at 11:08 AM Reminds me of the innocence of my childhood summers. Congrats on your win, Carrie. :) Janece Carrie Richards July 16, 2015 at 1:33 PM Thank you so much Janece !! So nice to hear from you!

John Lawless July 16, 2015 at 6:40 AM Carrie this is beautiful and the picture will keep recurring in my mind throughout the day...

Connie Marcum Wong July 16, 2015 at 4:26 AM This is haiku at its best Carrie. Kudos on your win! 7 for me!

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2015 at 11:50 PM a perfect example of true haiku. Congrats, and I just love this.

Lee Carter July 15, 2015 at 11:16 PM So sweet! Congrats !

Poet Destroyer A July 15, 2015 at 11:11 PM Carrie this is a delight to read, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Viv Wigley July 15, 2015 at 10:46 PM Lovely, joyful innocent reflection, Carrie, and a worthy win. Well done. Viv x

Skat A July 15, 2015 at 10:43 PM Hello, Carrie, amazing:) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**

Lee Carter July 13, 2015 at 11:17 PM Love this one!