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A Photo Taken in my yard.

Touched By a Butterfly

I was touched by a sweet butterfly
As it fluttered around me
Then quietly landed nearby
I could only watch to see
Where it would go next to be
A gentle, perfect creation flew
High and low from flower to tree
A magical flight moved me to be
      ---- Ever So Free ----

Heidi Sands


6/19/17

Placed joint 1st place in the Standard Contest 163.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Theraven Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 10:02 AM
Heidi, The moving lines and fragile nature of creation. I see them through your lines in 'Touched by a butterfly'. -Richard
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Hi Richard. Thank you so much. Interesting, they are blooming right now and I just saw the Tiger Swallowtail Butterfly on them again, the other day! Just as this was. They love them. I appreciate your comment. I have let the troubles in our country get to me too much and have ended up blocked with writing. I have to keep trying. Take care :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 2:32 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
Sands Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Thank you very much Sara :)
Pandit Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Congrats on your win Heidi..a magical poem.
Sands Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Thank you very much Vijay :)
Kinch  Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 12:32 AM
I love to sit and watch the butterflies in my own garden. Heidi this is beautiful.
Sands Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 7:24 AM
That is so nice that you can sit and watch them in your own garden Elizabeth. Thank you for this nice comment . Enjoy :)
Allison Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 12:47 PM
You have a wonderful eye for detail in your poetry, photos and beautiful artwork - an absolute delight to read - i LOVE poems about butterflies and of course dragonflies!:-) hugs jan xx
Sands Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 12:49 PM
Hi Jan.. Thank you so much for the supportive, comment. I will get some photos of the paintings in here in time. I am happy you enjoyed reading this :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 11:49 AM
A touching poem of bonding w/nature, Heidi. Keep letting your butterfly pen fly. free. Refreshing poetry that relaxes the mind. Love and joy always.
Sands Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Thank you for all your support Freddie. Will do :) Have a nice day !
Green Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 11:34 AM
As if spring is every day and if not, all we have to do is read this wonderful poem and it will be. Such a freeing and glorious piece my friend.
Sands Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 11:53 AM
That is nice to hear. Thank you very much :)
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:40 AM
And I am touched by your sweet poetry tonight, Heidi! Beautiful
Sands Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:44 AM
Thank you White Wolf. It makes me happy if my writing reaches people :) Have a great evening !
Smith Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Very beautiful Heidi
Sands Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:42 AM
Thank you Tim :)
Turner Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:35 AM
This is simply beautiful poetry, Heidi:) Most enjoyable!
Sands Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Hi Daniel. I am happy it is enjoyable :) Thank you.
White Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:21 AM
Sweet. A "Koninginnenpage" Papilio machaon :) (That was Dutch). Did you make the picture yourself? So beautiful agains the red.
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:39 AM
ik hoop dat je een goede dag hebt
Sands Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Hi Darren. Oh interesting. I was wondering ...I don't know dutch ..lol. Yes, I took that photo in my yard of the butterfly. Thank you :)
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