Touch Therapy - 8

5am, 5 gentle ear bites, 5 blinks
She needs to tell me what she thinks,
twilight tickles my waking heart,
She's anxious, in unannounced love,
She tells me she's afraid of love,
that she had a dreary dream
that she could only sing of love leaving,
of being a teary widow without warmth,
Her nails pressing into my still body,
a teardrop splashing onto my skin,
with my palm I push the pain back
from her wet, troubled cheek
and take hold of her firmly
with infinity in my eyes
firmness on my lips,
I tell her knowingly,
Your dream is not about love lost,
it's about love denied,
our love is alive, it's ours,
it will survive in our hands...

J.A.B.  2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 4/17/2025 1:36:00 PM
There’s something achingly beautiful in this, J.A.B.-- like waking from a dream with tears still in your eyes and someone there to hold the truth steady. The quiet repetition of “she’s afraid of love” hit me especially hard, but the gentleness in your voice--your presence--transforms the fear into safety. “With infinity in my eyes” is a line I’ll carry with me. You don’t just speak to her--you anchor her. Tender, poetic, unforgettable. --Alesia
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/19/2025 10:17:00 AM
I thank you for embracing the tenderness of this poem Alesia, I love your thoughts...J.A.B.
Date: 2/13/2025 1:58:00 AM
Love is best when both fragile and fierce. These words remind me of that. The speaker becomes such a steady presence… the touch —more comforting than words—pushes the pain from her troubles, holding not just with hands but with a promise of unshaken endurance. Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/22/2025 5:58:00 PM
Yes Laura, the pulse of love resides in our hands, our handle on heart...J.A.B.
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