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Touch Therapy - 6

Limerence lingered warmly on his shadowed lips from her kiss, Her perfect kiss, She enveloped his head with a raining fire of bliss, nothing was ever amiss with their love lock, She was his internal girl cure for the impossible pure, the Integrater of his trauma fever and of his passion hammer, flesh tones felt finer whenever She moved to nurture the torture of tomorrow, She was alive in his sparking mind, beyond the barbarity of reality, She's the only love he can find... J.A.B. 2023

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Alesia Leach

Date: 4/17/2025 1:32:00 PM

This one glows, J.A.B.--like something written through the smoke of memory and longing. “The Integrater of his trauma fever” might be one of my favorite lines of yours ever--it’s so vivid, so real. You’ve painted her as both savior and storm, as the one who softens the jagged edges of time. That final line hits like a truth too deep for daylight: She’s the only love he can find... A whisper of heartbreak beneath the fire. Beautiful work, as always. --Alesia

Justin Bordner
Date: 4/17/2025 2:02:00 PM

The poetry of your viewpoints ventures into a passion of a sympathetic connectivity Alesia. She's the only love he truly craves, the only love he knows how to care for...I thank you for your fervent thoughts Poetess...J.A.B.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/20/2025 12:06:00 PM

The way you weave romance is intense and so soul stirring! This is absolutely stunning and i love so many phrases here and so many lines resonate too, i especially love "raining fire of bliss" bliss amplified with your exquisite choice of diction! "She moved to nurture the torture of tomorrow," the internal rhyme and sound of words creates captivating cadence "beyond the barbarity of reality, She's the only love he can fin" such poetic romance woven in eloquence! Pleasure reading this gem!

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/20/2025 4:10:00 PM

She is the truth of beauty Poetess. I'm happy that you highlighted the essence of this write. I admire how you utilized the words Petrichor and Kismet in your recent poem Tears Of Time...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/13/2025 1:51:00 AM

I love this fervent, otherworldly love Justin. It’s a love with both a physical and spiritual necessity. There is a dreamlike quality of their relationship… a merging of the ideal and the real.. both balm and desire. Both savior and savored. Neither bound by any reality— their own eternal world. Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/19/2025 6:46:00 PM

A Muse made Flesh...a World made Art. Your analysis is superb Poetess...J.A.B.