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Touch Therapy - 6

Limerence lingered warmly
on his shadowed lips
from her kiss,
Her perfect kiss,
She enveloped his head
with a raining fire of bliss,
nothing was ever amiss
with their love lock,
She was his internal girl
cure for the impossible pure,
the Integrater of his trauma fever
and of his passion hammer,
flesh tones felt finer
whenever She moved to nurture
the torture of tomorrow,
She was alive in his sparking mind,
beyond the barbarity of reality,
She's the only love he can find...

J.A.B.  2023

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Alesia Leach Date: 4/17/2025 1:32:00 PM This one glows, J.A.B.--like something written through the smoke of memory and longing. “The Integrater of his trauma fever” might be one of my favorite lines of yours ever--it’s so vivid, so real. You’ve painted her as both savior and storm, as the one who softens the jagged edges of time. That final line hits like a truth too deep for daylight: She’s the only love he can find... A whisper of heartbreak beneath the fire. Beautiful work, as always. --Alesia Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 4/17/2025 2:02:00 PM The poetry of your viewpoints ventures into a passion of a sympathetic connectivity Alesia. She's the only love he truly craves, the only love he knows how to care for...I thank you for your fervent thoughts Poetess...J.A.B.

Ink Empress Date: 2/20/2025 12:06:00 PM The way you weave romance is intense and so soul stirring! This is absolutely stunning and i love so many phrases here and so many lines resonate too, i especially love "raining fire of bliss" bliss amplified with your exquisite choice of diction! "She moved to nurture the torture of tomorrow," the internal rhyme and sound of words creates captivating cadence "beyond the barbarity of reality, She's the only love he can fin" such poetic romance woven in eloquence! Pleasure reading this gem! Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 2/20/2025 4:10:00 PM She is the truth of beauty Poetess. I'm happy that you highlighted the essence of this write. I admire how you utilized the words Petrichor and Kismet in your recent poem Tears Of Time...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal Date: 2/13/2025 1:51:00 AM I love this fervent, otherworldly love Justin. It’s a love with both a physical and spiritual necessity. There is a dreamlike quality of their relationship… a merging of the ideal and the real.. both balm and desire. Both savior and savored. Neither bound by any reality— their own eternal world. Always, Laura Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 2/19/2025 6:46:00 PM A Muse made Flesh...a World made Art. Your analysis is superb Poetess...J.A.B.