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Fear not the flames around you, And those you think will burn. Move on despite the chaos, Until you touch the sun. Travel throughout eternity, Until your race is won. Never let your love extinguish, When you touch the sun. Live on forever caring, For those who fear to run. Keep your light always shining, As you touch the sun. Take on hope undaunted, And believe that it will come. Feel this pleasure ever growing, Once you touch the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/3/2021 3:03:00 PM
Really liked this poem and it's optimism. Good flow to it.
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Date: 10/25/2018 3:09:00 PM
Love this wonderful piece, Sanford. So Encouraging.
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Date: 10/20/2018 12:10:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 10/16/2018 9:13:00 PM
Very nice poem.:)
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Date: 10/16/2018 4:07:00 PM
A pleasure to know a poet who touched the sun. my compliments , Samford!!
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Date: 10/16/2018 12:13:00 PM
Beautifully written.! :)
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Date: 10/16/2018 7:04:00 AM
Nice piece with nice rhyme and good penning. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 10/16/2018 3:23:00 AM
I enjoyed, a piece full of a positive mood //Blessings in His light
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Date: 10/16/2018 12:19:00 AM
Excellent poem // the sun, power of eternity /// go and catch the falling shining of sun .......
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Date: 10/1/2018 7:00:00 AM
I am so pleased to have found and read and enjoyed another one of your fine poems my friend. A fav, a true gem this is...
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Date: 9/20/2018 5:56:00 PM
Hello Sanford Weir, a beautiful poem. So nice to meet you Sanford. This poem has inspiration. I like that. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/22/2018 1:36:00 PM
Some of my poetry comes to me in a dream. I writer down the idea then create my poetry. Have a nice day my friend.
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Sanford Weir
Date: 9/21/2018 8:56:00 PM
Darlene, Well, thank you for your kind remarks and thoughts. The poem came to me in a dream after reading a story about the launch of the Parker Solar Probe to the Sun. Sanford

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