Touch - Sharon's Acrostic


Tingling with excitement, she stepped 
Out of her comfort zone, 
Under the forest glade, she skipped,
Collecting flowers - her known 
Heaven in varied tones.



06/27/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Duet Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 11:30 AM
I just saw this one, Jo. Very nice indeed...so easy to imagine. I have been away for a while ...so plz except my belated congrats.
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 6:50 PM
this one was a very well deserved win. Congratulations, dear.
Hamilton Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 2:02 PM
Nice win Jo, congrats this one's a real beauty!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Lovely touch Jo, congratulations on your win.
Turner Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 6:06 PM
Hello girlie, Nice write:) Congratulations, Janice on your win. When in doubt play the nature card:)
Turner Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 12:45 AM
Sorry Jo:( Freudian slip? Congratulations JO on your win:)
Daniel Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Ahem! I'm Jo, DT, not Janice:)
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 2:20 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 11:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jo
Lindley Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Congrats on your win my friend. I knew this fine poem would place.. with its beautiful imagery and hope....
Gulley Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 8:55 AM
A lovely write and read Jo Daniel. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Thank you for entering. : )
Daniel Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 12:01 AM
Thank you very much, Sharon, for my placement:) all glory be to God alone:)
Lindley Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 10:06 AM
Beautiful short and sweet, with tremendous depth my friend! A very hard task to accomplish, yet you did.. An amazing creative feat, in an acrostic poem, no less! Should do very well in the new contest..
Nusker Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 3:48 AM
Lovely poem, Jo. Reminds me of Rapunzel when she first stepped out of the tower.
Kendrick Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 4:54 PM
Ahhh!! I really liked this one..It reminded me of Robert Frost's work..I enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 6:50 PM
this is heavenly, Jo, a winning write ~*
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 3:16 PM
ohh, this is heavenly, jo... you warm this page with your images!..huggs
Flannery Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 3:15 PM
Beautiful write and vivid in color left to the imagination. Take care.
May Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 1:47 PM
A lovely write Jo...best wishes
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:14 PM
this is really nice, Jo, and i admire you for trying new things like you told me about in your comment to me.
Turner Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Great acrostic, Jo. Good luck sweetie:)
Sands Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 8:05 AM
This is very nice Jo :)
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 5:23 AM
very pretty acrostic Jo good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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