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Written on March 8, 2025

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the mountains groaned, repulsed by the distant grumble of thunder’s rough voice rising on the edges of the dark stirring the distant gaze of a still twilight flooded with shadows, hasty halos remembering what comes, after the storm the gentle pelting, pretty droplets erasing the murmur of leaves, dancing crisp as the shadows, forever trembling a certain power beneath the streams pouring out their feelings, on hills burning with laughter, seeking the night where a brilliant lavender sky sings to the explosion of light… You are there, in the prayer melting away the pain, the despair quieting the music of a storm who knows my most intimate yearnings the muse of a promise, coursing through veins of light, inklings of a lost moment, when melancholy sings, so alive on the still skies where floods of water, stream, breaking through the forest, woodsy scents like pine and moss, delicate overpowering the still muse. In the center of this storm, an ache, a presence, so forlorn you pour out light from your warm, you restore peace to my heart you remind my soul, you’re the One who tells the winds to blow, who shows the moon its glow who breaths hope into the flow of wistful showers, all the hours a storm who is sent to show every heart, the music of hope as a song fades from the soul who hears the wind and heeds the stirring of a prayer beneath the dark praising You, my heart’s renown my spirit’s peace, my great belief… You are the One who colors my love with grace and joy a gentle knowing – that Your love will guide me through the storm, never allowing me to worry, always freeing me so I know You are the One who will lead me on, to a distant home, a heaven who knows this is love – from God above, the One who tells the storm to grow the One who tells the storm to go the One who tells the storm to restore gentle peace to the mountain and shore a still, cool breath from the spirit of grace, peace that is more than a heart can expect, the love that assures me You won’t reject. In the eye of the storm… You are my relief, my consolation, my security the answer to my prayer for a still, sweet beautiful who can prepare my heart to see beyond the storm, to the eternal singing, its urgent touch.

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Date: 4/27/2025 7:32:00 AM
Your build to a grateful ending is brilliant Gina. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/26/2025 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Storms are scary, some very dangerous with some deaths, injuries and destruction of property. It is good to have a stronghold to lean on. Sara K
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Date: 3/8/2025 10:09:00 PM
Much of this reminds me of Psalms, which was good, and small bits made me think of Ecclesiastes or Proverbs. I like this poem. Words from the heart.
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