Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

Touch Me Touch Me I Wanna Feel Your Body

Touch Me Touch Me I Wanna Feel Your Body!

Touch me touch me
I desire your gentle caress

Feel me, feel me
As I move deep within 

Kiss me kiss me
On the belly, all over me

In the dark, in the dark
I desire your sweet soothing words

Your heart beats along with my mine
My love is held by angel’s string

So this is the night
This is the time

I wanna feel your body
I wanna feel your hands

Wrapped around me
As I enter this world

From the darkness to light
Here I am

Momma momma
Touch me hold me

Caress me and hold your breast
I am the creation of your loves delight!

Thank you Momma
For creating another soul! 

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Jaycee Cervenka July 15, 2015 at 7:41 PM Arthur, you did a great job yith this and I like the turn in tone from lover too child. Not giving your reader any indication that this is really a birth..or was it simply the rebirth at a lovers hands. Nicely penned. Janet Arthur Vaso July 15, 2015 at 7:58 PM Thank you Janet, and yes I had fun with the twist here!

Casarah Nance July 6, 2015 at 11:57 AM aww, sugar sweet nicely done! Arthur Vaso July 14, 2015 at 10:36 PM Thank you, I was tickled by this one as well!

Harry Horsman July 6, 2015 at 11:27 AM A complex surprise, yet ever so intriguing Arthur Vaso July 14, 2015 at 10:32 PM Thank you Harry! :)

Nette Onclaud July 6, 2015 at 5:22 AM sweet element of surprise as i feel a babe in need of mom's gentle loving care, arthur.. huggs Arthur Vaso July 14, 2015 at 10:31 PM Thanks Nette! :)

Connie Marcum Wong July 6, 2015 at 2:41 AM Sharing birth is the most beautiful gift anyone can be given and to have a parents love is a divine blessing Arthur. Your beautiful poem shares this bliss! Arthur Vaso July 14, 2015 at 10:30 PM Thank you Connie, that was my goal here!

Andrea Dietrich July 5, 2015 at 11:34 PM I'm with MAma bear. Hmmm, making me think it was naughty at the first!! It's a GREAT poem and reminds me of a free verse I once wrote about a fetus!! Arthur Vaso July 14, 2015 at 10:27 PM Thanks Andrea! hugs!!

Mama Bear July 5, 2015 at 8:02 PM You wove a tangled piece with a brilliant ending Lots of imagery and very thought provoking. Loved it Blessings Edith Arthur Vaso July 5, 2015 at 8:12 PM Thank you I loved this idea when I thought of it!

Pandita Sietesantos July 5, 2015 at 7:18 PM Awwwww! this is such a beautiful touching tribute to the wonder and awe of a child's entrance into the world! How lovely! It brings back loving emotions as I think back to giving birth to my own two boys! Warmest regards. Pandita Arthur Vaso July 5, 2015 at 7:26 PM I am so happy people enjoyed this wee poem!

Emile Pinet July 5, 2015 at 5:53 PM Very well written with a surprise ending and strong emotions tugging at the heart strings. Emile. Arthur Vaso July 5, 2015 at 7:24 PM sorry comment went on wrong line, thank so much Emile! Hope all is well with you too!!! Arthur Vaso July 5, 2015 at 7:20 PM Thanks Tim!!

Afolabi Muideen July 5, 2015 at 4:41 PM What an intriguing piece, it so sweet and lovely......................A,M Arthur Vaso July 26, 2015 at 8:57 PM Missed this comment, thanks so much Afolabi

Tim Smith July 5, 2015 at 2:29 PM You had me to the end my friend...lol Arthur Vaso July 5, 2015 at 7:21 PM Thanks Tim!!!

Alexis Y. July 5, 2015 at 1:03 PM Wow! Arthur this is beautiful. I wasn' t expecting the ending, however what you delivered was outstanding! I'm going to definitely fav this 7 piece:-) Alexis Arthur Vaso July 5, 2015 at 7:21 PM Its fun that life is full of surprises!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 5, 2015 at 5:15 AM - Just lovely, Arthur ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Arthur Vaso July 5, 2015 at 6:26 PM Thank you Anne Lise, I rather liked this one myself the idea of it.

Njeri Hunjeri July 5, 2015 at 3:41 AM "From the darkness to light" nice song:-) Arthur Vaso July 5, 2015 at 6:24 PM Thank you, the song was the title!!!