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Touch Me Touch Me I Wanna Feel Your Body

Touch Me Touch Me I Wanna Feel Your Body! Touch me touch me I desire your gentle caress Feel me, feel me As I move deep within Kiss me kiss me On the belly, all over me In the dark, in the dark I desire your sweet soothing words Your heart beats along with my mine My love is held by angel’s string So this is the night This is the time I wanna feel your body I wanna feel your hands Wrapped around me As I enter this world From the darkness to light Here I am Momma momma Touch me hold me Caress me and hold your breast I am the creation of your loves delight! Thank you Momma For creating another soul!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/26/2015 8:06:00 PM

Some good comments Arthur.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/26/2015 9:10:00 PM

Thanks Richard, haven't been around this week, so great to hear from you!

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 7/15/2015 7:41:00 PM

Arthur, you did a great job yith this and I like the turn in tone from lover too child. Not giving your reader any indication that this is really a birth..or was it simply the rebirth at a lovers hands. Nicely penned. Janet

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/15/2015 7:58:00 PM

Thank you Janet, and yes I had fun with the twist here!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/14/2015 8:57:00 AM

Now that was certainly some misdirection! Mommy should spank you!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/14/2015 10:36:00 PM

oh Richard, what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas!!!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/6/2015 11:57:00 AM

aww, sugar sweet nicely done!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/14/2015 10:36:00 PM

Thank you, I was tickled by this one as well!

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/6/2015 11:27:00 AM

A complex surprise, yet ever so intriguing

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/14/2015 10:32:00 PM

Thank you Harry! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2015 5:22:00 AM

sweet element of surprise as i feel a babe in need of mom's gentle loving care, arthur.. huggs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/14/2015 10:31:00 PM

Thanks Nette! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/6/2015 2:41:00 AM

Sharing birth is the most beautiful gift anyone can be given and to have a parents love is a divine blessing Arthur. Your beautiful poem shares this bliss!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/14/2015 10:30:00 PM

Thank you Connie, that was my goal here!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2015 11:34:00 PM

I'm with MAma bear. Hmmm, making me think it was naughty at the first!! It's a GREAT poem and reminds me of a free verse I once wrote about a fetus!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/14/2015 10:27:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! hugs!!

Mama Bear

Date: 7/5/2015 8:02:00 PM

You wove a tangled piece with a brilliant ending Lots of imagery and very thought provoking. Loved it Blessings Edith

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/5/2015 8:12:00 PM

Thank you I loved this idea when I thought of it!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/5/2015 7:18:00 PM

Awwwww! this is such a beautiful touching tribute to the wonder and awe of a child's entrance into the world! How lovely! It brings back loving emotions as I think back to giving birth to my own two boys! Warmest regards. Pandita

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/5/2015 7:26:00 PM

I am so happy people enjoyed this wee poem!

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/5/2015 5:53:00 PM

Very well written with a surprise ending and strong emotions tugging at the heart strings. Emile.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/5/2015 7:24:00 PM

sorry comment went on wrong line, thank so much Emile! Hope all is well with you too!!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/5/2015 7:20:00 PM

Thanks Tim!!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/5/2015 4:41:00 PM

What an intriguing piece, it so sweet and lovely......................A,M

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/26/2015 8:57:00 PM

Missed this comment, thanks so much Afolabi

Tim Smith

Date: 7/5/2015 2:29:00 PM

You had me to the end my friend...lol

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/5/2015 7:21:00 PM

Thanks Tim!!!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/5/2015 1:03:00 PM

Wow! Arthur this is beautiful. I wasn' t expecting the ending, however what you delivered was outstanding! I'm going to definitely fav this 7 piece:-) Alexis

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/5/2015 7:21:00 PM

Its fun that life is full of surprises!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2015 5:15:00 AM

- Just lovely, Arthur ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/5/2015 6:26:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise, I rather liked this one myself the idea of it.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 7/5/2015 3:41:00 AM

"From the darkness to light" nice song:-)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/5/2015 6:24:00 PM

Thank you, the song was the title!!!