James Fraser Poet Etheree

Touch Me - Dusk

Dusk
we stir
hands in roam
adventurous
her scent captures me
teasing, her touch excites
meandering souls unite
curvaceously in dancing sync
such pertness allures, emotions run
quenched lips joyously grace, in kissing taste

cresting like breakers, rhythmical in soar
arching as hips grind, shadows abound
hands now clasped, sporadic sighs
loving chants of desire voiced
inner release erupts
implosion occurs
panting curbed
two in lie
content
Loved 






~*~ Touch Me - Dusk written by James Fraser for entry into Nette's ~*~
                     “TOUCH ME COUNT-UP AND DOWN” - Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 29, 2011 at 12:09 PM Congratulations James on your win in Nette's contest. Love, Carol

Kash Poet April 28, 2011 at 11:44 AM This is an excellent write James!Congrats on your win--kash

Carolyn Devonshire April 28, 2011 at 10:04 AM Dear James, Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts April 28, 2011 at 9:59 AM ~~sigh~~ oh yeah, congrats on your win James with this steamy number ( back to the cold shower)

Jack Horne April 28, 2011 at 7:58 AM Many congrats, James : )

Tahera Mannan April 28, 2011 at 6:13 AM many warm congrats for this win James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 28, 2011 at 5:00 AM Congrats James on your great win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry .. always amazing to read your words James.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch piece with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 28, 2011 at 3:29 AM This sure is one passionate piece on Dusk, James; whew, what a sizzler! Congrats on your win :)

John Freeman April 27, 2011 at 7:04 PM Congratulation James on your success in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire April 25, 2011 at 1:22 PM So "touching" in the romantic sense, James. Only you could bring true touch to dusk! Nette will love your entry as I do. Wishing you success! (And the green-haired monster was I. Wanted to surprise John with a new hair color and really did have to wear a wig at my wedding. Mom and I ran out and bought it quickly. It was streaked with blonde and brown. Maybe I'll scan it and send it to you. Did a great job covering up my mistake.) Love, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song April 24, 2011 at 5:38 AM Sizzzzzzzle! Sizzzzzlle! Vivid. Creative. Provocative! Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 19, 2011 at 9:03 PM Thinking along the same lines James as the love spills over into the dusk making this entry a great competitor luv.. good luck ..hot..

Shannon Deane April 19, 2011 at 11:43 AM Fantastic writing James, good luck with the contest

Wilma Neels April 18, 2011 at 1:26 PM Touch me, what a way to go with this one James ;) you got me smiling, I am sure this one will do good in Nette's contest.. Hope you are enjoying your time off work ;) x x

James Foulk April 18, 2011 at 10:42 AM a very creative write James, really enjoyed reading this one. Good luck in the contest.

Francine Roberts April 18, 2011 at 10:42 AM oh wow, I'll be back, need a cold shower now,...............ok this is fantastic, should do well in the contest