Touch Elder's Feet

Beta, take the tea to the drawing room First comb your hair and make a respectful smile Serve the tea and touch their feet Respect your elders, that is Indian style. Heard my mother, as I always heed Did the task, but it was a task indeed. But a question had got stuck amiss And it wouldn’t get off, until I wrote this. Is the respect in the union of our hand and their feet, Or is it in the sincere, honest and heartfelt greet? “Youth is spoilt,” elders always complain, “This isn’t modernity,” I don’t refrain. Touching elder’s feet does no harm It has been our culture since the time of Lord Ram. But what is the meaning of the culture If there is no respect in the heart, We need to have the feeling And not the idol on the cart!
[NOTE : Though the poem is about an Indian culture, but it has just been taken as a symbol for many other cultures in many other regions and religions which are blindly considered by their followers as being 'good' without reflecting about it. The lack of acceptance of new ideas have also been dealt with. GLOSSARY - Beta (Hindi) = son spoilt = spoiled Lord Ram = A Hindu God.]

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Date: 7/20/2013 12:49:00 AM
Wwoo..... truely indian ..... these r the same question i wonder... truly a great piece!:)
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Date: 7/15/2013 3:28:00 PM
This is a wonderful, well written poem. I think it is always good to have questions. A LOT of people don't feel the same way, but I am a logical being and this must ask questions to understand. Great piece!
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