Toto Takes Command

Toto knew the Girl understood that
their beaucoup would be trimmed of it's fat

They could use straw and tin
and the shoes she was in

but for SURE they were losing the cat..!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 10:01 AM
Really funny and creative! Cat be gone with wind, or tornado or such ;) Congrats!
Harding Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 5:18 PM
Hi, Kimmie! Thank you. xoxo LyLy
Messina Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 11:17 AM
Lycia, this is so funny. This last line crushed it! Congratulations on your top win in my contest. Merry Christmas to you and your family! Charlie
Harding Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 5:20 PM
Thank you, Charlie. What a great topic for a contest - very original! Happy holidays to you and yours, as well. xoxo LyLy
Johnson Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 5:54 AM
This is a great take on the OZ troupe. One of my favorites in the contest. Well done - MDJ
Harding Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 5:24 PM
Thank you, MD! xoxo LyLy
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