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Tossing Around In the Wind

i feel lost in the dimness of this day my thoughts stirring in this wind ascending then descending in a spiral of emotions scattered like these leaves painting the ground in drifts of red i never cared for that color nor this autumn air i feel lost within its grasp

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Hello There

Date: 10/17/2019 3:28:00 PM

Your mood matches the weather too precisely, my friend. Here's to feeling found... <3 hugs ~ and excellent write!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/17/2019 8:18:00 PM

Guess you are having the same weather as me...i so dislike this and they are calling for lots of rainy days in the 7 day...i want summer back.... Thank you my friend :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/17/2019 1:50:00 PM

'that spiral of emotions (ascending and descending) -- Thank you for that. I was racking my brain, (please excuse the assumptions implicit in those five words), for such a phrase a week or two ago. Thanks for supplying it. Beautifully depicted, Sandra! Smiles, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/17/2019 8:17:00 PM

Well thank you Gershon, and so very glad i could help :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/17/2019 12:42:00 PM

Windy day in your part of the town--we are facing a bit of it here in Maryland also. I see the drifting red in your poem.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/17/2019 8:16:00 PM

You are not too far from me, so probably the same type weather... the gusts have been up to 50mph...it's bone chilling cold if you have to walk out in it...i can't find warmth ... hugs

Bobby May

Date: 10/17/2019 12:12:00 PM

Silent One said you are very great he is wrong you are perfect!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/17/2019 8:14:00 PM

awww thank you Bobby, what a sweet thing to say... :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 10/17/2019 12:11:00 PM

Sounds as if the weather and the season are not to your liking my friend. But somehow, when it is said poetically in your wonderful style, it doesn't seem so bad from here. Here's hoping the sun finds you and returns your smile to where it belongs. Beautifully done Sandy. Still, as if spoken in a whisper.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/17/2019 8:13:00 PM

I am not a fan of this weather, it's cold, and extremely windy...it left me chilled to the bone... your wonderful comment offered some warmth... thank you my friend :) hugs