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tattered, ragged and frayed~ throbbing and aching pain tangled in a maze like trance of chaotic thoughts ... threadbare and faded, the tapestry of life, is tarnished with my anguish _ _________________ April 26, 2021 Poetry/Pleiades Verse/tortured Copyright Protected, ID 04-1349-689-26 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Pleiades T sponsor, Kim Merryman, Judged 04/26/2021 First Place

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/29/2021 8:14:00 AM

Constance, you clearly portrayed "tortured" in gripping language. Beautifully written! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2021 10:45:00 AM

Kim, thank you for the inspiration and contest and my placement and the comment, compliment and congrats, peace _Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/28/2021 12:36:00 PM

Dropping by with congrats on this great winner. Enjoyed reading it today. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2021 7:07:00 AM

Sara, thanks for the congrats and compliment, peace _Constance

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/28/2021 7:01:00 AM

_Constance, Finding raw depth in poetry in the Pleiades series. Refreshing to see this poem. -Richard

Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2021 7:10:00 AM

Richard, thanks for the compliment on this poem and all my poems in the Pleiades series, peace _Constance

Carol Mitra

Date: 4/28/2021 12:10:00 AM

Sounds truly like torture, congrats on your win Constance...much love do take care :)

Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2021 7:11:00 AM

Carol, thanks for the comment and congrats, peace _Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/27/2021 9:46:00 PM

Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2021 7:11:00 AM

Alex, thanks for the congratulations, peace _ Constance

Suzette Richards

Date: 4/27/2021 9:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this great write, Constance :))

Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2021 7:12:00 AM

Suzette, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, peace _Constance

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/27/2021 8:09:00 PM

Wow! Amazing write, Constance! Congrats on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2021 7:13:00 AM

Seeker, thanks for the compliment and congrats, peace _Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 4/27/2021 7:47:00 PM

Awesome Pleiades, Conastance, I do like the use of words on this poem. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2021 7:13:00 AM

Eve, thanks for the compliment and congratulations, peace _Constance

David Mchattie

Date: 4/26/2021 6:13:00 PM

Nicely done. The words flow beautifully. I love it. Stay well. BOL in the contest. I think we have a winner.

Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2021 7:14:00 AM

David, thanks for the compliment on my poem, peace _Constance

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/26/2021 4:46:00 PM

Gorgeous pleiades that flows beautifully line to line, Constance. Great job! BOL in the contest...

Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2021 7:14:00 AM

Edward, thanks for the compliment, peace _Constance

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/26/2021 3:00:00 PM

Well written Constance. Excellent :)

Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2021 7:14:00 AM

Heidi, thanks for the compliment, peace _Constance

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2021 12:44:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your T Pleiades. It's so perfectly penned; I like it when you say tapestry of life is tarnished with my anguish _ Blessings and Regards Constance

Constance La France
Date: 4/26/2021 2:07:00 PM

Lasaad, thank you for the compliment, appreciate, love _Constance

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/26/2021 10:09:00 AM

A splendid write, Constance. You have embellished the "T"s with strong images. I enjoyed it.

Constance La France
Date: 4/26/2021 2:07:00 PM

Milt, thanks for the compliment, grateful, love _Constance

John Lawless

Date: 4/26/2021 9:28:00 AM

beautifully written Constance, a smooth blade with an edge

Constance La France
Date: 4/26/2021 2:08:00 PM

John, thank you so much for the compliment, love _Constance