Constance La France Poet Verse

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Tortured

tattered, ragged and frayed~
          throbbing and aching pain
                    tangled in a maze like
                          trance of chaotic thoughts ...
threadbare and faded, the
                    tapestry of life, is
tarnished with my anguish _

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April 26, 2021


Poetry/Pleiades Verse/tortured
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1349-689-26
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France


Written for the Standard contest, Pleiades T
sponsor, Kim Merryman, Judged 04/26/2021

First Place

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Kim Merryman April 29, 2021 at 8:14 AM Constance, you clearly portrayed "tortured" in gripping language. Beautifully written! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Constance La France April 29, 2021 at 10:45 AM Kim, thank you for the inspiration and contest and my placement and the comment, compliment and congrats, peace _Constance

Sara Kendrick April 28, 2021 at 12:36 PM Dropping by with congrats on this great winner. Enjoyed reading it today. Sara Constance La France April 29, 2021 at 7:07 AM Sara, thanks for the congrats and compliment, peace _Constance

Quoth Theraven April 28, 2021 at 7:01 AM _Constance, Finding raw depth in poetry in the Pleiades series. Refreshing to see this poem. -Richard Constance La France April 29, 2021 at 7:10 AM Richard, thanks for the compliment on this poem and all my poems in the Pleiades series, peace _Constance

Carol Mitra April 28, 2021 at 12:10 AM Sounds truly like torture, congrats on your win Constance...much love do take care :) Constance La France April 29, 2021 at 7:11 AM Carol, thanks for the comment and congrats, peace _Constance

Christuraj Alex April 27, 2021 at 9:46 PM Congratulations! Constance La France April 29, 2021 at 7:11 AM Alex, thanks for the congratulations, peace _ Constance

Unseeking Seeker April 27, 2021 at 8:09 PM Wow! Amazing write, Constance! Congrats on your win! Constance La France April 29, 2021 at 7:13 AM Seeker, thanks for the compliment and congrats, peace _Constance

Eve Roper April 27, 2021 at 7:47 PM Awesome Pleiades, Conastance, I do like the use of words on this poem. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Constance La France April 29, 2021 at 7:13 AM Eve, thanks for the compliment and congratulations, peace _Constance

David Mchattie April 26, 2021 at 6:13 PM Nicely done. The words flow beautifully. I love it. Stay well. BOL in the contest. I think we have a winner. Constance La France April 29, 2021 at 7:14 AM David, thanks for the compliment on my poem, peace _Constance

Edward Ibeh April 26, 2021 at 4:46 PM Gorgeous pleiades that flows beautifully line to line, Constance. Great job! BOL in the contest... Constance La France April 29, 2021 at 7:14 AM Edward, thanks for the compliment, peace _Constance

Heidi Sands April 26, 2021 at 3:00 PM Well written Constance. Excellent :) Constance La France April 29, 2021 at 7:14 AM Heidi, thanks for the compliment, peace _Constance

Sotto Poet April 26, 2021 at 12:44 PM I enjoyed reading your T Pleiades. It's so perfectly penned; I like it when you say tapestry of life is tarnished with my anguish _ Blessings and Regards Constance Constance La France April 26, 2021 at 2:07 PM Lasaad, thank you for the compliment, appreciate, love _Constance

L Milton Hankins April 26, 2021 at 10:09 AM A splendid write, Constance. You have embellished the "T"s with strong images. I enjoyed it. Constance La France April 26, 2021 at 2:07 PM Milt, thanks for the compliment, grateful, love _Constance

John Lawless April 26, 2021 at 9:28 AM beautifully written Constance, a smooth blade with an edge Constance La France April 26, 2021 at 2:08 PM John, thank you so much for the compliment, love _Constance