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Torrential Tears

Torrential Tears

Lost in a cyclone
Abandoned I storm alone
Torrential tears roam.




Sept.01.2017
Senryu on Sadness
Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Janis Medders Tobechi

September 7, 2017 at 9:25 AM

Really sad and lovely too. Congratulations.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

September 5, 2017 at 1:44 PM

Sad yet beautiful poem, WW. A stunning title as well. Pure poetry, my friend. Love and smiles.

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:52 PM

Thank you so much Freddie...always nice to see you...god bless...^WW^

Paul Callus

September 4, 2017 at 1:19 PM

Exactly what the sponsor ordered:) an excelent metaphorical winning senryu! Congratulations, WW. Regards // paul ... ps love the song

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:52 PM

Thank you kindly, Paul...always nice to see you my friend...god bless...^WW^

Subimal Sinha-Roy

September 3, 2017 at 11:07 PM

Congratulations on your win, WW.NP8

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:50 PM

Thank you, my friend...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong

September 3, 2017 at 10:24 PM

An excellent senryu WW. Congratulations on your win! : )

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:49 PM

Thank you kindly dear Connie...god bless...^WW^

Eve Roper

September 3, 2017 at 5:59 PM

Great imagery, ^WW^,. congratulations on you win Hugs Eve.. ~`*

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:48 PM

Thank you so much, Eve...god bless...^WW^

Roy Pett

September 3, 2017 at 5:10 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win WW, great Senryu. :))

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:44 PM

Thank you so kindly Roy...god bless...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues

September 3, 2017 at 1:17 PM

A fantastic image. Congrats WW!

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:44 PM

Thank you Kim...god bless...^WW^

Heidi Sands

September 3, 2017 at 11:40 AM

Congratulations WW for this great poem and your win :)

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:43 PM

Thank you, Heidi...god bless...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 3, 2017 at 11:34 AM

-I'm back :) - Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:43 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise...^WW^

Charlie Smith

September 3, 2017 at 10:43 AM

Not surprised to be congratulating you WW...

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:42 PM

Thank you, Charlie...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 2, 2017 at 4:25 PM

- Excellent for this contest W.W., good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:38 PM

Thank you so much dear Anne-Lise...god bless...^WW^

Tim Smith

September 2, 2017 at 9:11 AM

A lot held in this short verse WW.... wonderful image

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:38 PM

Thank you so much, Timmy...god bless...^WW^

Russell Sivey

September 2, 2017 at 4:46 AM

This is a stunning write my friend! And it rhymes, a Senryu that rhymes...that is difficult to do WW! I rather enjoyed reading you amazing poem this morning! You have written a spectacular piece, such a thought provoking poem, Great Work!!

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:37 PM

Thank you so Russell...god bless my friend...^WW^

Susan Ashley

September 1, 2017 at 11:07 PM

WW, awesome and powerful! I love the second line especially. Good luck my friend! :)

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:36 PM

Thank you, dear Susan...god bless...^WW^

Joseph May

September 1, 2017 at 6:41 PM

Very nicely done WW...

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:35 PM

Thank you, Joseph...god bless...^WW^

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 1, 2017 at 6:19 PM

Marvelous! Just marvelous dear WW!

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:34 PM

Thank you Demetrios...our far away friend...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

September 1, 2017 at 5:28 PM

OH, I love that middle line. "I storm alone" very unique!

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:33 PM

Thank you, Andrea...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong

September 1, 2017 at 4:26 PM

Your wonderful poem reminds me of the devastation weather has caused the south and how people are coping. Excellent senryu WW! : )

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:33 PM

Thank you, dear friend...always nice to see you, Connie...god bless...^WW^

Vladislav Raven

September 1, 2017 at 4:10 PM

Hi WW, i have started to get a real appreciation for these smaller forms. This is an excellent Senryu, with such a lovely content. The words could bring forth a tear. A wonderful song sung WW. Good luck in the contest. This Senryu goes into my faves. Your friend always....Mike.

Winged Warrior

September 5, 2017 at 5:31 PM

Thank you, Mike...me too, my friend...short and sweet and powerful...they can be fun to write...god bless...^WW^