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Torrential Tears

Torrential Tears Lost in a cyclone Abandoned I storm alone Torrential tears roam. Sept.01.2017 Senryu on Sadness Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 9/7/2017 9:25:00 AM
Really sad and lovely too. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/5/2017 1:44:00 PM
Sad yet beautiful poem, WW. A stunning title as well. Pure poetry, my friend. Love and smiles.
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Freddie...always nice to see you...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/4/2017 1:19:00 PM
Exactly what the sponsor ordered:) an excelent metaphorical winning senryu! Congratulations, WW. Regards // paul ... ps love the song
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:52:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Paul...always nice to see you my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/3/2017 11:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, WW.NP8
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:50:00 PM
Thank you, my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/3/2017 10:24:00 PM
An excellent senryu WW. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thank you kindly dear Connie...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/3/2017 5:59:00 PM
Great imagery, ^WW^,. congratulations on you win Hugs Eve.. ~`*
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/3/2017 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win WW, great Senryu. :))
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:44:00 PM
Thank you so kindly Roy...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/3/2017 1:17:00 PM
A fantastic image. Congrats WW!
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:44:00 PM
Thank you Kim...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/3/2017 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations WW for this great poem and your win :)
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/3/2017 11:34:00 AM
-I'm back :) - Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:43:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...^WW^
Date: 9/3/2017 10:43:00 AM
Not surprised to be congratulating you WW...
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie...^WW^
Date: 9/2/2017 4:25:00 PM
- Excellent for this contest W.W., good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:38:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Anne-Lise...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/2/2017 9:11:00 AM
A lot held in this short verse WW.... wonderful image
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Timmy...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/2/2017 4:46:00 AM
This is a stunning write my friend! And it rhymes, a Senryu that rhymes...that is difficult to do WW! I rather enjoyed reading you amazing poem this morning! You have written a spectacular piece, such a thought provoking poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so Russell...god bless my friend...^WW^
Date: 9/1/2017 11:07:00 PM
WW, awesome and powerful! I love the second line especially. Good luck my friend! :)
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, dear Susan...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/1/2017 6:41:00 PM
Very nicely done WW...
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/1/2017 6:19:00 PM
Marvelous! Just marvelous dear WW!
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:34:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios...our far away friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/1/2017 5:28:00 PM
OH, I love that middle line. "I storm alone" very unique!
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/1/2017 4:26:00 PM
Your wonderful poem reminds me of the devastation weather has caused the south and how people are coping. Excellent senryu WW! : )
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend...always nice to see you, Connie...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/1/2017 4:10:00 PM
Hi WW, i have started to get a real appreciation for these smaller forms. This is an excellent Senryu, with such a lovely content. The words could bring forth a tear. A wonderful song sung WW. Good luck in the contest. This Senryu goes into my faves. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:31:00 PM
Thank you, Mike...me too, my friend...short and sweet and powerful...they can be fun to write...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/1/2017 3:50:00 PM
i can't imagine you stranded and alone... lovely poem, WW, so languid the expressions..huggs
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:29:00 PM
Thank you kindly, my friend...with your friendship, not likely, nette...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/1/2017 1:29:00 PM
what warrior wing ed we last anchor thrown ... what sea has sunk ... wariior indeed ... love hour mind shape man ...
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:27:00 PM
Thank you, my eccentric friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/1/2017 12:06:00 PM
Brilliant WW...
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:26:00 PM
Thank you bud...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/1/2017 12:03:00 PM
loved the title " torrential tears"
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:23:00 PM
Thank you, Shari...god bless...^WW^
Date: 9/1/2017 10:42:00 AM
Wowsers! Potent :) xomo!
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Maureen...god bless...^WW^
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