Torpedo

that familiar refrain flailing arms in the night an itch filled torpedo small but bitey mozzzzzzzzzzquito! Bite Sized Poem no50 poetry contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/26/2022 7:15:00 AM

So clever and delightful ~

Julie Draper
Date: 10/26/2022 11:09:00 AM

Thanks Line... It's nearly mozzie season here again! :)

Gary Radice

Date: 8/21/2022 7:15:00 AM

A great 'bite' sized poem Julie :) Cheers - Gary

Julie Draper
Date: 8/21/2022 12:08:00 PM

Thanks very much Gary :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/20/2022 10:48:00 AM

an itch filled torpedo! Love this! Congratulations!

Julie Draper
Date: 8/20/2022 12:31:00 PM

Thank you Kim, I appreciate your feedback :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2022 8:28:00 AM

Isn’t it amazing how one tiny little insect can completely irritate and upset one’s calm. If trying to sleep, it is the worst sound. Congratulations on your wonderful win Julie. Blessings xxoo

Julie Draper
Date: 8/20/2022 12:26:00 PM

Thank you Connie. That Mozzie whine is teeth gratingly annoying isn't it :) I appreciate your feedback.