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Tornadic Anger

Fierce and destructive Not as pleasant as one think The terror of the clouds.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/27/2009 4:53:00 AM

Dear Elizabeth, YOUR desciption is so Vivid and real Only once did I ever see a tornado and i was Terrified Great Haiku LOVE ALWAYS ...HG

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/24/2009 8:03:00 AM

The devastaion lasts for a long time after the fierce winds leaves...Raul

Date: 5/23/2009 4:28:00 PM

So much truth shared in just three lines. Yes, those tornados bring terror and destruction. Let's hope there aren't many this summer. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Sean Kelly

Date: 5/21/2009 8:37:00 AM

You are on a Haiku roll here, Elizabeth , so write onnnnnnn .... This excellent form reminds me of my boss's description of his former wife ,prior to their divorce ; " She was fierce and destructive , and when she left , she took the house " .....

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/20/2009 3:08:00 PM

Very good. Living in tornado ally helps you see what you wrote here. Nate.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2009 2:26:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Elizabeth. You capture the power of tornados very well! We have lots of them in North Florida and the destruction can be overwhelming. Lots are spawned by hurricanes, but some generate out of small storms. Love this poem! Carolyn