Torn Reflection

I look into the mirror and wonder where I went wrong. 
The smile is fake and the blush is gone. 
Pasty white, 
Nothing is right. 
I try a different angle, maybe a different face. 
Trying to make myself look normal, not out of place. 
Something new, 
Not too showing and not too true. 
The snarl is too weak, the growl is too soft. 
My eyes are too telling, I couldn’t help but scoff. 
Angry with myself, I turn away from what I didn’t want to see. 
Who am I? Is that really me? 
I don't know where I am, and I can't seem to feel
I know I'm living a life, but nothing seems real.
It doesn't make sense, and I don't know where to start.
How can I put things together so they aren't falling apart?
The day's gone to night, and I can't recall a thing,
I wonder what tomorrow is going to bring?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 6/28/2012 10:34:00 PM
Wow. That last question is one that I have asked myself. I've enjoyed reading and hope to see more - JH
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Date: 6/26/2012 8:51:00 PM
a wonderful day filled with blessings,pray when you wake in the morning,great write Kimmie
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Date: 6/24/2012 9:19:00 PM
These questions struck me to my very core! Thanks for sharing your poem with us. I hope you enjoy others' works as much as I did with yours. :)
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Date: 6/24/2012 6:54:00 AM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Kimmie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/24/2012
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Date: 6/21/2012 12:18:00 AM
It happens sometime but we hav to learn to hav faith in ourselves,try to b good and we wil see that someday the smile wil b for real.Lovely write
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