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Torn Apart

Tiny Devils leaking out of my pen, running over the page
                         Hell bent on desolation, DEATH and destruction
                     All  Love, Friendship, Kindness, slaughtered  in Rage
                       A temple to our lord ; with tridents start construction


                      The tainted walls built with innocent blood, lies, deceit
                        Four corner towers: Murder, Hate, Infidelity, and Lust
                       One Demon looked up at me “Do YOU declare defeat?”
                                               Come Comrade join US

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Date: 12/29/2011 10:44:00 PM
A very powerful poem. This one awed me. Love it, in that bittersweet kind of way. ;) Always, Laura
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