Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

Tormented With Troubled Thought

I woke to the raucous roaring of beasts braying in the night
Creepy things crawling over my body.  I cringed at the sight
I fought off diabolic demons who tried to devour my heart
Shadows snared me; I was tormented with troubled thought
Phantoms played on pauper's graves 'til my pulse grew weak
I was petrfied with fear, knowing my death they'd soon seek!
Ghosts and ghouls wailed at me, and scratched upon the walls
I cowered under the quilt when werewolves howled in the halls



October 25, 2020
8 Lines of Spooky Rhyme
Contest sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Sam Kauffman November 11, 2020 at 12:21 PM This is truly spooky and chilling Jenna -all those frightening things that go bump in the night! So glad you had the armor of your quilt! Congratulations on your win! Jenna Logan November 12, 2020 at 12:46 PM lol Sam. A quilt of armor is all a child needs to be protected from night monsters. Thanks for the comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2020 at 11:29 AM - A scary poem ... - Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jenna Logan November 10, 2020 at 3:52 AM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise.

Constance La France November 6, 2020 at 10:41 AM Jenna, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance Jenna Logan November 10, 2020 at 3:52 AM Thank you, Constance.

Tania Kitchin November 5, 2020 at 1:46 PM Jenna, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky and creepy poem! Jenna Logan November 5, 2020 at 9:55 PM Thank you for honoring my lines with a placement, Tania.

Mystic Rose Rose October 26, 2020 at 8:21 PM Very spooky indeed brought a shiver to my spine dear Jenna, well written , keep up the great writes, Jenna Logan November 3, 2020 at 12:01 PM Thanks for your encouragement, Pixie.

Darlene De Beaulieu October 26, 2020 at 11:16 AM Hello Jenna Login, I feel badly for you to go through this. It should not of happened. Do not comment on his poem. I think you had a spooky dream. Enjoy your day my friend. Jenna Logan November 3, 2020 at 12:00 PM In this case spooky is good. Thanks, Darlene.

Linda Alice Fowler October 26, 2020 at 6:34 AM Very Poe-ish Jenna. I like it! {} Linda Jenna Logan November 3, 2020 at 12:00 PM The creepy crawlers...lol Thanks, Linda.

Alexis Y. October 25, 2020 at 2:43 PM Jenna, You have penned some creepy and spooky lines. It “ screams ” nightmare to me. If was reading this I would have the urge to cut on all the lights. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Jenna Logan November 3, 2020 at 11:59 AM It kind of creeped me out too! Thanks, Alexis.

Gordon Mcconnell October 25, 2020 at 2:41 PM Real scary pen Jenna, with great imagery and expression. Hope all safe with you, Blessings, Gordon Jenna Logan November 3, 2020 at 11:59 AM All is well and good with me, Gordon. Thanks!

Mark Koplin October 25, 2020 at 11:56 AM I'm glad I waited until daylight to read this one, spooky indeed. Great job Jenna! Jenna Logan October 25, 2020 at 2:26 PM Sleep with the lights on until after Halloween! Thanks so much, Mark.

Jan Allison October 25, 2020 at 11:14 AM Your lines certainly are creepy! Well penned Jenna:-) hugs jan xx Jenna Logan October 25, 2020 at 2:26 PM Yes, they really are. Thanks a lot for leaving your comments, Jan.

Peter Dome October 25, 2020 at 11:09 AM Wow Jenna. a sure winner. excellent spooky images. I shall sleep with one eye open tonight. scary. Jenna Logan October 25, 2020 at 2:25 PM Hi, Pete!. Thanks. I appreciate your thoughts that it might find a place on the judge's list.

Tom Cunningham October 25, 2020 at 9:57 AM Wow, that was some nightmare Jenna, no strong cheese before bed lol. Good luck Tom Jenna Logan October 25, 2020 at 2:25 PM Cheese, huh? I wasn't aware. Thanks so much for the information and good luck thoughts, Tom.

Silent One October 25, 2020 at 9:52 AM Damn, now that is scary... thankfully not real... Nice entry for this contest... Jenna Logan October 25, 2020 at 2:24 PM I nearly scared myself with the creepy crawlers all over me, and demons trying to eat my heart! lol Thanks for reading and commenting.