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Topless Shoreline

Glowing with distended buds her taut convex bare the chilly morning tide's touch

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/16/2012 8:32:00 PM

a monoku encore!!!!......hint hint! lol.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2011 6:58:00 PM

Stopping by to say Good night and read one more random poem,,James... i love the nude sand image... take care,..p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/7/2011 8:14:00 AM

ooh wee, James ;) Such a provocative write that brings forth a couple of images, cleverly written :D

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/7/2011 6:19:00 AM

These words leaves a lot of imagination..clever one..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2011 10:34:00 PM

OOOOH, cool monoku, James. I enjoyed it!

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/6/2011 7:29:00 PM

This too, could be talking about more than the scenery of the trees....nature in the flesh as well... your poems are a gift! and your words left on mine are also a gift, ....thanks so much for your kind words, James! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/6/2011 1:39:00 PM

Interesting Monoku..Thanks for the kind review of my work about Queen...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/6/2011 1:22:00 PM

Wilma's right, James. The "distended buds" evoke quite an image. Excellent monoku, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/6/2011 12:56:00 PM

Interesting form, well done. Good morning James. Thanks for calling on me. My cool and fast moving summer is in Northwest Washington state. Love, Joyce

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/6/2011 12:05:00 PM

Stunning imagery James, absolutely love "distended buds" thank you for dropping by on my side of the world. Enjoy the rest of your day and week :) love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2011 12:02:00 PM

oh how mesmerizingly beautiful James.. and I do return the compliment dear poet friend.. your words tantalize and excite as well partner .. enjoyed this view tremendoously.. enjoy a wonderful rest of week luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2011 11:51:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it James. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2011 11:49:00 AM

how picturesque, james... so well-written with rich imagery! :) huggs, nette