James Peranteau Poet Monoku

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Glowing with tumid buds hern taut convex bear the frore morning tide's touch












*'bout thuh title, it wuz the only
  way to share this Monoku with
  y'all on one line  ") it's a special 
  one for a special girl ')

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Gwendolen Song January 16, 2012 at 8:32 PM a monoku encore!!!!......hint hint! lol.

Poet Destroyer A October 21, 2011 at 6:58 PM Stopping by to say Good night and read one more random poem,,James... i love the nude sand image... take care,..p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 7, 2011 at 8:14 AM ooh wee, James ;) Such a provocative write that brings forth a couple of images, cleverly written :D

C.C Bloomsfield July 7, 2011 at 6:19 AM These words leaves a lot of imagination..clever one..

Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2011 at 10:34 PM OOOOH, cool monoku, James. I enjoyed it!

Carrie Richards July 6, 2011 at 7:29 PM This too, could be talking about more than the scenery of the trees....nature in the flesh as well... your poems are a gift! and your words left on mine are also a gift, ....thanks so much for your kind words, James! :)

Sara Kendrick July 6, 2011 at 1:39 PM Interesting Monoku..Thanks for the kind review of my work about Queen...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire July 6, 2011 at 1:22 PM Wilma's right, James. The "distended buds" evoke quite an image. Excellent monoku, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson July 6, 2011 at 12:56 PM Interesting form, well done. Good morning James. Thanks for calling on me. My cool and fast moving summer is in Northwest Washington state. Love, Joyce

Wilma Neels July 6, 2011 at 12:05 PM Stunning imagery James, absolutely love "distended buds" thank you for dropping by on my side of the world. Enjoy the rest of your day and week :) love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 6, 2011 at 12:02 PM oh how mesmerizingly beautiful James.. and I do return the compliment dear poet friend.. your words tantalize and excite as well partner .. enjoyed this view tremendoously.. enjoy a wonderful rest of week luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 6, 2011 at 11:51 AM Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it James. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud July 6, 2011 at 11:49 AM how picturesque, james... so well-written with rich imagery! :) huggs, nette