Jean Murray Poet Verse

Topless

I'm motoring about with my top down.
I'm getting strange looks, but never a frown. 
Ladies eyes go green and mens’ chins drop.
Until it clouds over and I have to stop.
I press a little harder and up it comes,
as the first drops of rain begin to drum.
It lands with a click and on we go.
Me and my darling convertible Peugeot.

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Viv Wigley June 27, 2018 at 1:04 AM I can imagine you cruising with the top down, in your Ray-Bans, pastel coloured jacket with rolled-up sleeves, Jean. Sort of 'Miami Vice', with Guinness. Nice write! Viv x Jean Murray June 27, 2018 at 1:21 AM Silly boy...if my top is down, then my jacket must be off!!!

Pashang Salehi June 14, 2018 at 5:57 PM Cute... like always... Pashang Salehi June 16, 2018 at 10:48 AM Love to see it... I bet it'll be great... Jean Murray June 15, 2018 at 1:37 AM I must get back to base here Pashang. At the moment I am putting together my second book of picture poems, where I match personal photos to personal poems. Each book must have 60 poems, so progress is slow...but fun.

Eve Roper June 13, 2018 at 10:38 AM I love the verse, Jean, way to go with the top down on your convertible... the title was really a catcher :) Hugs Eve Jean Murray June 13, 2018 at 12:01 PM Thank you Eve.

Lyric Man June 7, 2018 at 10:39 PM Clever fun write, Jean.. you're an artist! Jean Murray June 8, 2018 at 3:43 AM That's a lovely compliment Chance. Thank you.

Line Gauthier June 6, 2018 at 7:31 PM A fun poem, Jean. Superbly penned. Jean Murray June 7, 2018 at 1:31 AM Thank you Line.

Daniel Turner June 6, 2018 at 12:13 PM Living large, Jean:) Wonderful to read you again, love the humor. Jean Murray June 7, 2018 at 1:31 AM LOL. Daniel Turner June 6, 2018 at 12:59 PM You're going to have to put the top back down, I can't see! Jean Murray June 6, 2018 at 12:57 PM Yes Daniel, but they say anymore than a handful is wasted! Lovely to see you this evening. You and Eve called me back to the fold, so here I am....topless!

Tom Cunningham June 6, 2018 at 10:25 AM Haha title certainly drew me in Jean, my brother had one,great in the fine weather. Bet you look super cool in your shades, hope the fine spell stays with you. Tom Jean Murray June 6, 2018 at 10:59 AM Actually Tom....I do!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 6, 2018 at 8:27 AM Giggles ;p xomo! Jean Murray June 6, 2018 at 8:56 AM Smirk!

Jan Allison June 6, 2018 at 8:20 AM Ha ha ha you tinker with that title lol:-) hugs Jan xx Jean Murray June 6, 2018 at 8:55 AM One has to draw the punters in somehow Jan.