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Everything's going good, I've no problems to tell It's so wonderful that it's all starting to gel! With all of that said, You'd say I'm ahead But my car broke down, so now I'm afoot as well!

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Fj Thomas

Date: 3/29/2018 6:06:00 PM

Lolol did not see that one coming PAT!

Pat Adams
Date: 3/30/2018 1:52:00 PM

A sneak attack!! Thanks for commenting!...patrick

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/29/2018 12:26:00 PM

Giggles galore! Fabulous limerick dude! xomo :)

Pat Adams
Date: 3/29/2018 4:08:00 PM

Well, thank you much there cool chick!!!!........80)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 3/29/2018 11:20:00 AM

BA DOOP PSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Pat Adams
Date: 3/29/2018 4:07:00 PM

Yeah, I've got a million of em! Just call me Shecky Dangerfield!!......80)

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/28/2018 11:47:00 PM

You got a giggle from me. Well done, Pat.

Pat Adams
Date: 3/29/2018 7:31:00 AM

Hey! It's all about the giggles!!!.............80)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2018 5:18:00 PM

there is always something to bring us down so this is such a realistic scenario Pat! hugs jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 3/29/2018 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Yes there's always something isn't there!!................80)