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Everything's going good, I've no problems to tell
It's so wonderful that it's all starting to gel!
With all of that said,
You'd say I'm ahead
But my car broke down, so now I'm afoot as well!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Thomas Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Lolol did not see that one coming PAT!
Adams Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 1:52 PM
A sneak attack!! Thanks for commenting!...patrick
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Giggles galore! Fabulous limerick dude! xomo :)
Adams Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Well, thank you much there cool chick!!!!........80)
Cozart Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 11:20 AM
BA DOOP PSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Adams Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 4:07 PM
Yeah, I've got a million of em! Just call me Shecky Dangerfield!!......80)
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 11:47 PM
You got a giggle from me. Well done, Pat.
Adams Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Hey! It's all about the giggles!!!.............80)
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 5:18 PM
there is always something to bring us down so this is such a realistic scenario Pat! hugs jan xx
Adams Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Thank you Jan. Yes there's always something isn't there!!................80)
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