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Top Ten Thank God (Part 2)

Some have head but they cannot think Some I’d love to think but have no head You have head, hands…and you don’t stink Thank God for your life… you are not dead Some are educated but have no job Some have jobs but they aren’t educated Whatever you earn from your juicy or just job Thank God for your life, don’t complain instead Some are cute but they have no spouse Some have spouse but they seem not beautiful You are someone’s sweetie…in a happy house Thank God for your world so white and wonderful Some have womb but they have no child Some have children but their womb is gone You have womb and children …so meek and mild Thank God for your dear daughters and sweet son Some have ballpoint pen but they cannot write Some can write but they have neither pad nor pen You have pen to write… in black and white Thank God for ranking your writings… top ten

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Date: 8/25/2010 6:18:00 PM
I enjoyed your top 10 very much,thank you for your constructive thoughts and I will look that up and yes it was true,the lady I met brought her husband up north to go hunting one last time with his sons and his friends,he passed away shortly there after.
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Date: 7/20/2010 4:33:00 AM
funny and so true, great 10 thankfulness poem!!
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Date: 7/19/2010 2:42:00 PM
Interesting write that you have penned in this one..If it is for the contest should be in the winners' circle..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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