Top Ten Thank God (Part 2)

Some have head but they cannot think
Some I’d love to think but have no head
You have head, hands…and you don’t stink
Thank God for your life… you are not dead

Some are educated but have no job
Some have jobs but they aren’t educated
Whatever you earn from your juicy or just job
Thank God for your life, don’t complain instead

Some are cute but they have no spouse
Some have spouse but they seem not beautiful
You are someone’s sweetie…in a happy house
Thank God for your world so white and wonderful

Some have womb but they have no child
Some have children but their womb is gone
You have womb and children …so meek and mild
Thank God for your dear daughters and sweet son

Some have ballpoint pen but they cannot write
Some can write but they have neither pad nor pen
You have pen to write… in black and white
Thank God for ranking your writings… top ten

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/25/2010 6:18:00 PM
I enjoyed your top 10 very much,thank you for your constructive thoughts and I will look that up and yes it was true,the lady I met brought her husband up north to go hunting one last time with his sons and his friends,he passed away shortly there after.
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Date: 7/20/2010 4:33:00 AM
funny and so true, great 10 thankfulness poem!!
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Date: 7/19/2010 2:42:00 PM
Interesting write that you have penned in this one..If it is for the contest should be in the winners' circle..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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