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Top of the World

I run up the steps..
                                            jumping over the pitfalls..
                                                then wink at the sun..



"Top of the world" contest
written by Michael J Falotico

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 18, 2011 at 5:49 AM

Congratulations on your 1st Place in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

November 18, 2011 at 2:39 AM

MICHAEL, congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

November 17, 2011 at 11:19 PM

Hey, just seeing this one now. This is really really good!! A well deserved win. Congratulations!

Gwendolen Song

November 17, 2011 at 5:33 PM

Your Book's name? I might have to buy it for my Christmas gift to myself! Give me the total scoop! Gwendolen

Olusegun Arowolo

November 16, 2011 at 2:17 PM

Awesome write,Michael.Congratulations on your well deserved win...

Gwendolen Song

November 16, 2011 at 12:29 PM

Congrats on your Top of the World honor, Michael...truly a great image...reminds me of Rocky movie for some reason...amazing success for your new book also..so very proud of you, dear poet. your hard work is paying off. Gwendolen

Black Eyed Susan

November 16, 2011 at 8:27 AM

congratulations on your win! i love the last line :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 16, 2011 at 7:52 AM

Congrats Michael luv on a perfect first place win with these dynamic words of expression and vivid imagery .. a perfect creation my muse... your J.G. in ouchy mode..haha..xoxox..

David Williams

November 16, 2011 at 5:54 AM

Michael congrats on your great win, and good luck with the book..David

Skat A

November 16, 2011 at 2:51 AM

congrats in my contest..~LUV*SKAT

M.I.A .

November 16, 2011 at 1:07 AM

^.~ Good luck in the contest cos this one is definitely 'Top Of The World'!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 15, 2011 at 8:07 PM

can picture u doing just that Michael luv.. a fabulous visual delight and very positive piece luv..good luck in the contest.. J.G. enjoying her muse tonight ..xoxox..

Elizabeth Wesley

November 15, 2011 at 8:40 AM

This is full of energy and that last line is a piece of cake!

Nette Onclaud

November 15, 2011 at 8:39 AM

enthralling piece , michael!... so talekn by this!!...winning wishes and miss ya too!.. did " quadruple" tetractys for you; hope it's okay..:) huggs!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

November 15, 2011 at 6:30 AM

Ooh! I love this one! You should do well in the contest. (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

Fabiyas M V

November 15, 2011 at 6:26 AM

Brilliant piece,Michael.It is a great entry for the contest.

James Rasmusson

November 14, 2011 at 7:49 AM

Hi Michael, I just entered your 'Double Tetractys' contest with my poem titled "sad". I'm not sure if I did it correctly as I didn't have my name on it the first time I tried. I removed the poem, put my name on it, and re-tried. Hopefuuly it came through and you know it's from James Rasmusson, MeanderthalMan.

Poet Destroyer A

November 13, 2011 at 1:00 PM

Excellent... This is a top of the world image.... Love it..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

November 13, 2011 at 1:14 PM

Thanks Linda. The contest made me think.

Poet Destroyer A

November 13, 2011 at 1:01 PM

Pretty clever

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

November 13, 2011 at 11:11 AM

and I think it winks brightly back at you, Michael ^_~ What a very positive write :) hugs :D

Sarah Seraphin

November 13, 2011 at 10:44 AM

* “Thank You Sweetie * Tis Always A Joy When Hearing From Your Tender Beautiful Heart * My Dear Sweet Precious Michael * I Too Am Finding Quite A Bit of Loveliness As Climbing These Stairs Unto Beauty * Very Pretty Painting * Luv Always * Sarah.” *