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Top Gun

quatrozain The year is nineteen hundred eighty-six, the biggest action, music, plots play through. Behold the crowds are raving, buying ticks! Top Gun, the movie’s here and overdue. While brave Tom Cruise, the hero, rims the sky, it’s really only stuntmen on those planes. And to be sure, a romance follows nigh - the female fans expect that love will reign. Parental guidance warns some shoddy talk, which gives the picture young adult appeal. The sexy scenes are clean as new white chalk; a final song provides nostalgic feel. The mix for Top Gun 2, as yet unknown - they must incorporate a role for drones. Reason A. Poteet 09 Oct 2014 iambic pentameter for Giorgio's Contest III

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Date: 11/8/2014 5:31:00 AM
Wonderful write, congrats on the win, Reason
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Date: 11/6/2014 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Reason. Very well written.
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Date: 10/15/2014 11:25:00 AM
Excellent. Good luck in Giorgio's contest.
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 11/6/2014 5:25:00 PM
Thanks, Maurice, and btw, congratulations on your own wins of late in Regina's and Dr. Ram's contests. I note that we are side-by-side on the Winner Poets list. I look to be overtook shortly, I welcome your challenge.
Date: 10/9/2014 3:32:00 PM
I was so small back then but I do remember the glasses. Very well done and written poem, and I applaud you for a unique and original theme.
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Date: 10/9/2014 3:03:00 PM
I think everyone had those sunglasses and the aviator jacket....cheers
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/6/2014 7:49:00 PM
Not me.
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Date: 10/10/2014 6:29:00 AM
Movies have that effect on the marketing of fads. Appreciate the comment.