Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet Ode

' Toothy Fruity Faith Ode '

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Blind...with the beauty and symmetry of nature
Can't espy the astonishing and sedate scenes of ardour
Just living with the greatest and blindest darkness
Imageless and almost senseless...

Deaf...with the mellifluous and profound music of amity
Can't harken the serene and blithe tune of natural creativity
Just living with my own nothingness
Dumb and almost senseless...

Mute...can't explode feelings and heartstrings through words and expositions
Can't speak and expound my real emotions
Can't shout out loud, just living with silence - soundless
Dumb and almost senseless...

Paralyzed...can't accomplish what was desired to achieve
Can't act, can’t execute, can’t move - there's no relieve
Just living with myself, occupied by loneliness
Cripple and now USELESS

Balked, feeble, depraved, weak - a YOUNG LOSER
Living with the lies through one's teeth? Will never be ...
And will never SURRENDER
Still BREATHING
BELIEVING...
KNEELING...
PRAYING...

~~~Armed to the TEETH with Faith and Devotion~~~


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Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2011 at 1:40 PM Congratulations in the contest of Nancy Jones "A Toothful Ode" Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta September 18, 2011 at 11:12 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Jun-jun

David Williams September 18, 2011 at 3:51 AM jun-jun congrats on your great win..David

Caryl Ramsdale September 18, 2011 at 1:12 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in the Toothful Ode contest sponsored by Nancy Jones. CR

Joyce Johnson September 17, 2011 at 5:22 PM Great work, poem and win. congratulations. Joyce

Nancy Jones September 17, 2011 at 4:45 PM Love the darkness followed by the bright flash, jun-jun. Awesome write! Thanks for supporting my contest! ~N

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 17, 2011 at 4:41 PM CONGRATS JUN-JUN ON A FANTASTIC WIN WITH DYNAMIC POETRY MY FRIEND..LUV..

Elizabeth Wesley August 20, 2011 at 10:35 AM An emotional verse to fascinate Jun Jun, Have a great weekend.

Poet Destroyer A August 14, 2011 at 3:01 AM Nice.. nice... can you believe that i had a hard time trying to post a comment here. It has been over 30 minutes and finally. Your poem finally loaded, well maybe tomorrow. I will figure it out. have a nice one,, and thanks for sharing your poem. I wonder if it is only me~ having trouble here on the soup tonight... take care,..LINDA