Toothpick Legs

“How come they all have Toothpick Legs?”
She wonders aloud, 
face furrowing into a deep red frown. 
“And mine are so big?”
“Genetics. Look at me and Mom.”
OK, I’m a blockhead. 

Seven-year old angst understandably not placated.
 “Your legs are beautiful and strong.”
Seems I’m getting somewhere now.
“Adventure legs are what you have.
You run so fast, the boys can’t catch you.”
“Well, one.” She corrects me.

“Look at the amazing things you can do.
Ski, surf, run, bike, skate, anything."
Her cheeks turn just a little scarlet.
Silently, One day, someone will love you, 
adventure legs and all.
Like I love your mama.

After a ski day, she drew a prone stick figure.
Curiously, I ask, “What’s that, honey? 
Why is she lying down?”
Big smile, with a hint of mischief.
“She can’t snowboard very well.
Toothpick Legs.”

4/2/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/22/2016 9:37:00 AM
Human beings can't get no satisfaction. You know, "the grass is always greener ..." We are often disappointed with what we have, and covet what we lack....
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/22/2016 4:21:00 PM
Yup. She's got a lot to be thankful for...
Date: 4/3/2016 2:05:00 PM
Your daughter looks amazing and you must be so so proud of her - Your poem shows how body conscious they are at such a tender age - love the term toothpick legs - I use the term 'sparrow legs':-) hugs Jan xx7
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/3/2016 10:48:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! I was really surprised to hear it from her at that age...
Date: 4/3/2016 12:27:00 PM
hahaha. the picture she drew. Is this a true story? It's so awesome because it is showing how a relationship with a daughter should be. This is wonderful!!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/3/2016 10:49:00 PM
Yup All true. I have to wonder if we're spitting in the wind with the whole body image thing, though. Thx for reading!
Date: 4/3/2016 10:21:00 AM
Great kids! Love to read about your family, Tom. Great write. Peace my friend:)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/3/2016 10:49:00 PM
Thx Daniel!
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