Toot Suite

TOOT SUITE


Alas, as hunters treed their prey
envisioning the feast
gravied meal at end of day
sopped up in breaded yeast.

An ill wind blew
and no one knew
from where it emanated

As sugar in the innards boils
and then - a little toot uncoils
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:47 PM
Cleverly executed. Congratulations. Joyce
Mehta Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:38 AM
Awesome win with three stanza suite. Congrats, very unique, John
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