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Toodle-Loo Bye-Bye

“Okay then, alright then, toodle-loo, bye-bye!” Sure love to hear that again My first wife would end each phone conversation With this familiar old refrain Once uttering these words of sheer finality It was over, finis, a done deal Even though their words are heard trailing off Time's up, no chance to repeal Was definitely over when this sweet lady quoted These charming memorable words Am I dreaming or did I actually just hear them again Can't be true, that's totally absurd! “Okay then, alright then, toodle-loo, bye-bye!” Love to hear those words again Life has moved on but love to hear them once more That familiar sweet old refrain

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Date: 10/27/2022 7:01:00 PM
Sounds so light-hearted, fun and positively pleasant, Jack! (I think I can hear them too. And if I can, all the more so can you!)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/28/2022 4:54:00 AM
Shhh I think I can too!!! Good morning my good buddy!
Date: 10/26/2022 3:05:00 PM
So sweet! A friend used to say “toodles.”
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/26/2022 3:31:00 PM
My first wife was much more elaborated! She never messed us... everything in the right sequence! Still miss her so after 22 years! XOX
Date: 10/26/2022 10:26:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W-EYCAWRItU ....reminds me of that 'oldt phrase...... ...'sock a doodle do...... stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/26/2022 11:55:00 AM
This is my take on Hollywood! Have a good day friend!
Date: 10/26/2022 8:30:00 AM
Interesting how these little, simple, routine things take on more significant meaning when they are gone.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/26/2022 9:10:00 AM
Just simple such things that my first wife made famous! Strange how these things stick!!! Cheers my friend!

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