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Toodeloo Foot

Withstrained I have long been,
By the chain of ignorance.
My brain and my whole being,
Held by the bolt of cognitive hindrance.

This shackles of darkness,
I strove to whittle out from,
To quench this dire thirst for awareness,
Whatever it takes; even if I deform. 

And with an insane resolve,
One I never knew I could muster,
This foot I now absolve,
From its fetters; it growled like a monster.

On this mighty pen, I shall lean,
I would rather it doubles as a crutch,
And for every word I shall learn,
It be both the writer and my clutch.

Omarnaseer©
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 11:54 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 10:00 AM
Awesome ink! Write on! :) xomo
Nasir Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 7:21 PM
Thank you so much Maureen. Apologies for the late reply.
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