Too Weak To Cry

Unwanted, forced from my mother's womb;
cold, this table where I am lying.
Just one of the aborted millions . . .
does no one care that I am dying?

People wait for my breathing to cease,
callously turning to walk away;
those who should be giving loving care
are extending blood stained hands for pay.

Copyright, August 24, 2015
Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/16/2015 9:26:00 AM
Hi Faye: A very intense poem. My compliments!
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Date: 9/16/2015 1:15:00 AM
Wonderful imagery n powerful words mark your superb write Faye! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:34:00 PM
sweet win
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Date: 9/14/2015 11:51:00 AM
So powerful is your poem, Faye! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/14/2015 5:30:00 AM
*** Moving are the lines. Great emotional appeal that carried me through and how cruel is the first two lines in the second stanza... I am nurse although some countries already permits therapeutic abortion still... you bring here an ethically controversial issue, though I've also read that the medical practitioners have a right to refuse to be involve in these procedures... CONGRATULATIONS and thank you for participating!!! =`)~Olive ELoisa
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2015 5:31:00 AM
I am glad that you entered this one... =`)
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