Too Silly For Words

I wanted to age graciously,
Serene, ladylike and wise,
But I get confused and muddled
And I've come to realise

Things happen to me,
That takes me by surprise
Everything unravels before
My fading eyes.

I cannot enter a room,
Without tripping at the door
With a feeling of doom
I lay spread eagle on the floor.

Everyone stops talking
And stares at me
I wish they would stop gawking
At the blood oozing from my knee.

Then someone stirred
And tried to drag me to my feet
I did not utter a word
As I scrambled toward a seat.

Serenity and calm
Vanished into thin air
As for wisdom and charm
It was lost, beyond repair.

Someone applied some cream
And placed a bandage on my knee
I felt like it was all a dream
How unladylike can a person be,

With shaking hands, I tried
To drink the welcome cup of tea
Then I dropped the cup
It spilled all over a Bonsai tree

I was not at home,
I was at my best friend's house
I went alone
There were several more visitors
Including my friend's spouse

My friend was devoted
To her Bonsai trees
She stunted their growth
To a size that pleased.

She entered them in contests
And very often won,
I had ruined her chances
With the damage, I had done.

I was feeling depleted
Hot and sweaty too
I was utterly defeated
And wish I could start anew

I know this won't happen
I've tried many times before
Because I fell into some bracken
As I waved goodbye at their front door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/7/2023 12:46:00 AM
Oh Shirley your poem touched my heart and l just want to give you a big cuddle! So lm sending you a cuddle and some love my dear sweet friend! Debx
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Date: 3/5/2023 7:53:00 PM
Shirley, you done outdiddy done yourself with this one. What else could possibly go wrong?! Really felt your shame right through every stanza of this gem. ~ Gershon
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Date: 3/5/2023 1:57:00 PM
Its not the falling, one thinks..? Rather the Failing of resistance, and bounce it really Stinks, or sucks..Or drains its insane..' In the main, and maybe mirey more In any case, i'll play it safe keeping A Graceful distance from trees Bracken and briars near Front doors.'
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Date: 3/5/2023 8:17:00 AM
Spilling tea on a bonsai tree, it's not the end of the world. Depends on when it was watered before and after.
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