Too Raunchy

Old Jack is going to turn over new leaf Gonna be prim and proper to everyone's relief Been much too naughty Getting way too raunchy But trust me, this hiatus will definitely be brief © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Breidenthal Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 6:30 PM
No worries! We all get a kick out of your raunchiness. : ) Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 7:10 PM
Must remember to keep a lid on it though! Thanks sweet thing! Love, Jack xxx
Smith Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Brevity at it's finest
Ellison Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 3:35 PM
"Brevity is the soul of wit"... Shakespeare!!!
Wigley Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 12:43 PM
Now, Jack will be back we all hope, with rhymes about having a grope, him not being rudee with lines about nudies, is like Groucho Marx becoming Pope. Viv
Ellison Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Great comeback my friend! LOL LOL LOL
Eastman Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Ahhh. As I suspected... Hey... John may not be writting much lately... But love his comments... You two are quite a duo... and possibly the talk of PS... Definitely to the enjoyment of Grandpa Troll... He thinks you're better than the old comics and funny pages... LOL
Ellison Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 10:41 AM
The Dynamic Duo!!!!!!!!
Ellison Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 10:30 AM
Now there's a sight! Fishnet hose... sex on a pogo stick! What the hell does that mean? Have been trying to work that into a conversation for so long... this was probably not the time!!!
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 7:11 AM
No way Jack - you speak with forked tongue lol Jack and turn over a new leaf in the same sentence - never... we love you just the way you are:-) hugs Jan xx do drop by and see me sometime:-)
Ellison Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 7:16 AM
You are so sweet... I will be visiting shortly my dear sister... love, Jack xxx
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