Too Quiet

The sun's not up it's much too early
House so quiet it's almost surly
Could brew some coffee
And chew on toffee
Sure wish I had a cat called Curley



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on January 4, 2019 for contest FOOD FOR THOUGHT sponsored by SILENT ONE  -  RANKED 2ND
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Carber Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 8:10 AM
This is CUTE! A perfect tidbit! Congrats on your win, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 10:17 AM
Thanks, LJ. Most appreciated.
Raven Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Hi Line, dropping by with my congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Thank you so much, Mike. Most appreciated.
Pandit Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:42 PM
Congrats on your win, Line..great poem.
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Most appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:37 PM
- A great win Line, congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Canerdy Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:29 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Thanks, Janice. Much appreciated.
Wolf Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Yes, indeed: Moe and Larry are so lonely without her... LOL. (Just kidding of course). Congrats, Line, on your win in the contest! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 2:07 PM
LOL you are too funny, Gershon. Thanks for your visit.
One Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 10:39 AM
Great limerick Line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 11:30 AM
Thank you so much, SO. I appreciate your comment and high placement.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 8:22 AM
Coffee - Toffee has a snappy, happy ring to it. I like how you went from a surly house to that snappy rhyme. Well done for sure my friend!
Gauthier Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 11:54 AM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
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