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Too Pricey

A smartly dressed fellow from Austin Met a sweet little tart in Boston She rode in his car But not very far He realized what it would cost ‘im. written July 30, 2021

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/9/2021 10:18:00 PM

Hello Milton ... he escaped just in time to wake up I'd say Milton - thank you - Lindsay

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/10/2021 8:49:00 AM

That's pretty much the case, Lindsay. Thanks for your read.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/31/2021 8:25:00 PM

I hear 'sweet tarts' cost a 'pretty penny' in Boston. LOL. Good one, Milt.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/31/2021 9:23:00 PM

From what I hear, that's correct, gw.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/31/2021 6:59:00 PM

He is a wise man!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/31/2021 7:08:00 PM

Absolut-er-ly!

Justin Abdool

Date: 7/31/2021 3:05:00 PM

Good one Milt. Justin

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/31/2021 3:10:00 PM

Thanks, Justin. It can happen!!!

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/31/2021 12:56:00 PM

You're a master with Limerick, Milton, and you hit the jackpot with this poem. I love it.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/31/2021 1:20:00 PM

LOL. Thanks so much, Lasaad.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/31/2021 11:40:00 AM

Especially with the cops on his tail . . . .

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/31/2021 1:24:00 PM

So true. He should have asked for an ID before letting her in the car!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/31/2021 8:36:00 AM

Hahaha! Good one!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/31/2021 1:25:00 PM

Thanks, Unseeking Seeker. It was a fun write.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/31/2021 3:08:00 AM

Lol, he got out in the nick of time. Enjoy your weekend Milton. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/31/2021 7:30:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. You have a wonderful weekend, too.