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Too much to offer

I gave you a piece of me, This doesn’t make you, Necessarily a cannibal I missed that piece all of a sudden, I tried to take it back, But you had it already in your stomach, And dumb happiness reflected on your face. I felt suddenly sad, I’d lost a piece of me, But weirdly I felt heaviness, Instead of lawfully released. You surprised me with a smile, And a piece of you offered in gift, I had no place for it, So, I pained deep inside my bones, Cried out this was a mistake, Ran away, Crippled, cold and all alone, No magic trio in this story, Right place, right person, right time Just a single revelation instead, I offered a wrong piece of myself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/24/2010 2:51:00 AM
can feel the regret
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Date: 8/1/2009 6:07:00 AM
Good morning Mirela, thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. I am hoping you will enjoy your weekend as much as I am going to enjoy mine. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2009 4:26:00 PM
Very interesting use of allegory. Keep writing. Sara
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