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This poem received 2d place in this contest, 8/24/2025

TOO MUCH SIMLICITY IS ENOUGH

TOO MUCH SIMPLICITY IS ENOUGH*
Poem writte for "Too Much Is Enough Poetry Contest," Margarita Lillico, sponsor, August 2, 2025
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I sift through the clutter of days, where too much becomes a weight, and enough an inaudible whisper, barely heard above the clamor. I once chased abundance, collecting positions and things like seashells, each one a promise, each one a burden, until excess turned into shackles. In the clamor of this abundance, I found myself lost— a wanderer in the garden of plenty, flowers blooming in wild abandon. The weeds crept in, choking the roots of joy. I pondered, “How much is too much, when the heart is heavy with an unknown longing and the soul craves simplicity and stillness?” I breathed in, finding solace in the balance, where ‘too much’ fades into the background, and enough, sweet enough, stands at the forefront of my personal revolution. I discovered a quiet truth: enough is not the absence of desire, but the fullness of being, the serene knowledge that having too much simplicity is simply enough. Note:“Most of us have grown up with a capitalist worldview, which makes a virtue and goal out of accumulation, consumption, and collecting. It has taught us to assume, quite falsely, that more is better… E. F. Schumacher said years ago, ‘Small is beautiful,’ and many other wise people have come to know that?less stuff invariably leaves room for more soul. In fact, possessions and soul seem to operate in inverse proportion to one another.” (Adapted from Richard Rohr,?The Art of Letting Go: Living the Wisdom of Saint Francis, written for Center for Action and Contemplation, 2024.)
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Date: 8/24/2025 11:21:00 AM
Nice poem. The contentment of enough is the prime satisfaction.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/24/2025 5:48:00 PM
thank you, kind sir, for visiting and for your comments. I agree with you about contentment. enjoy your week ahead
Date: 8/2/2025 10:30:00 PM
An excellent poem dealing with excess and the contentment of a life of enough. This should do well in the contest, Sara. Good Luck! Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/3/2025 5:56:00 PM
thank you, hubby, for your positive words and encouragement. It was a fun write for me...GRRRR Sara
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