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Too Much Civility

There's too much civility hanging out here Will try to create mayhem while drinking a beer For the common good Will do what I should But it may be too much for this mortal so mere © Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

Date: 5/18/2015 6:17:00 PM

Jack! Jack! Jack! You old Pirate! You are NOT a mere mortal!... Honest! Really! And nothing is too much for a pirate... Arg! Me hearty!... LOL... Sigh! No Dragon 'Me Hearty doesn't mean I gave LimmerJack my heart and left you behind... There's room for the penguins... and yes, even you! Had him worried there for a moment. Think a few Pirates Movies from yon... yesteryear... are now in order. Storm Troopers he understands... Ummm... Maybe better not... He's wild enough as it is already!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/18/2015 6:21:00 PM

He shouldn't worry but I haven't made my famous move on you yet!!! LOL xxxxxx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/17/2015 10:55:00 PM

Love this one, especially the last line! Very clever!! My brother and I love your limericks! Keep it up! and on to the next we go! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/18/2015 5:46:00 AM

Think I strained myself with this one... "mortal so mere"!!! Hmmm! Heard a rumour, Jack Ellison is madly in love with Laura B. YUP! It's true... I can see the tabloids having a field day with this one! xxxxxxxxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/17/2015 8:07:00 PM

Mere coffee to your beer. Welcome again Jack dear!

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 10:11:00 PM

Missed you sweet Kimmie, but that goes without saying! Huggsies and much love dear friend xxxxxx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/17/2015 7:12:00 PM

Nothing's too much for you young Jack. Just keep pumping your humour out - Lindsay

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 10:09:00 PM

How is it down under? Florida was absolutely gorgeous as usual! Happy to be back amongst all my Souper friends! Cheers, Jack

Tim Smith

Date: 5/17/2015 10:00:00 AM

Its not even 10 am here but I just might join you in that beer....it is vacation week for me now : )

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 10:34:00 AM

You're on my friend! Well, I'm happy for you now Mr. Tim!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2015 9:11:00 AM

haha, No, jack, YOU can DO it!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 10:15:00 AM

Gonna give it my best shot!!! Have a great Sunday, dear Andrea! Huggsies, Jack xxx

Nandita Das

Date: 5/17/2015 8:59:00 AM

WOW...So good to have you back. You sure are doing what you should for the common good. Making us laugh with your limericks. Thank you.

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 9:06:00 AM

That's always been my goal here and in life! Live, love, and be happy... my motto! Thanks dear Nan for welcoming me back... sure missed all you sweet people! Lov and hugs, Jack xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 5/17/2015 7:48:00 AM

Made me smile Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 7:54:00 AM

Happy to see you a-grinning dear sister! Hugs, Jack xxx

Darlene Gifford

Date: 5/17/2015 7:26:00 AM

Thanks, Jack, for my morning cup of humor...Darlene

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 7:58:00 AM

You are very welcome, my dear Darlene! You made my day!!! Huggsies, Jack xxx