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Too Much Blubber

Just as I wrote about an unusually cool summer We get hit with a severe heat wave, whatta bummer Wilting would describe Our overheated hide Serves us right for carrying too much blubber © Jack Ellison 2015

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/17/2015 12:26:00 PM

sunny here but not too hot - sit with a nice cool beer and chill:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/17/2015 12:33:00 PM

High 80s here today... it's our own fault complaining about a cool summer! LOL Hugs, Jack xxxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/17/2015 9:52:00 AM

It's 90 here. California is over 100. The menagerie are running the slip and side into the lake. And the penguins are using their umbrellas as boats. Dragon is frolicking in the sprinkler garden hose. He likes the wet TShirt look... Says it makes his bling sparkle! He'll let everyone use him as a dock later... to dive off of... We've got this heat down pat!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/17/2015 12:41:00 PM

It's all my fault... I complained about a cooler summer than normal! Bummer! xxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/17/2015 8:15:00 AM

Time to hit the pool. Wear your shades : )

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/17/2015 8:25:00 AM

I am soooo cool wearing shades... damn, can't keep the ladies away! LOL!